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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That. Was. HOT! This is an awesome story. Neji and Gaara helping the two of them get together...ah, how selfless.
Hope to see some Neji/Gaara/Neji smut in the next chapter~
Hope to see some Neji/Gaara/Neji smut in the next chapter~
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow, that was some fucking amazing sex. Damn
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job at popping both yours and their cherries!!! It was excellent. One thing though, you have develope instead of envelope as Sasuke enters Naruto. Which if you think about it, is pretty funny. This is great, when do we get to see Neji and Gaara jump each other... I can wait, I just don't want to.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't be nervous, that was well done. I can't wait to see what Gaara and Neji have to say about it, and perhaps some comforting of each other as well. Good job, I can't wait for the next one.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi this is shai's inner bastard; shai is currently passed out on the floor due to massive blood loss and all ceasing of brain function. *crawls back up to computer chair*. Damn I think I just got hit by a drive by lemon ;-) Your first one eh...hmmm are you sure about that because it was incredible. So I wonder were the boys sitting in the bushes watching this display of animalistic sex??? I can't wait for the next chapter to find out. Oh and thanks for the massive nose bleed.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoooo, early christmas present for meee!!! this must have been posted mere hours after i reviewed :D :D yaayy no long waiting for me!
Have to say, naruto is one badass uke! i adore demanding uke!naruto. i really thought he was gonna seme out there for a moment lol, but regardless he was still seriously calling the shots on this one. My Gosh! face push inna dirt an all, you go boys! hot hot hott!!
And of course i HAVE to comment on naruto laughing at sasuke's 'sissy' comment at the start. i was rolling! LMAO sasuke did sup to feel like a real suck out bag juice
Have to say, naruto is one badass uke! i adore demanding uke!naruto. i really thought he was gonna seme out there for a moment lol, but regardless he was still seriously calling the shots on this one. My Gosh! face push inna dirt an all, you go boys! hot hot hott!!
And of course i HAVE to comment on naruto laughing at sasuke's 'sissy' comment at the start. i was rolling! LMAO sasuke did sup to feel like a real suck out bag juice
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good but...well...Ive actually found myself more interested in Gaara and Neiji than I have in the main characters. Lol, what can I say, your good at what you do. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THE LEMON WAS FREAKING AWESOME!!! I'm so happy Sasu and Naru-chan got their time together! I wonder what Neji and Gaara were doing...hehe...
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here I was, gone for a few days and then, when I went looking for updates I find not only ONE more chapter but TWO!!! Oh my God, I'm sosososososo happy. These chapters are so beautiful and heartwrenchingly sad. You describe Naruto's pain so well and the way Sasuke is holding himself back from loving him has me ripping my hair out in frustration. And then finally the scene where Neji lost it. *sigh* I love it when he gets all riled up. And that little comforting gesture for Gaara...*another sigh* soooo beautiful. I love it, I love it, I love it!!! More please ^_^ Oh and I updated Fateful Days...(sorry, I don't know how I could let you know any other way, so..yeah)
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.......Poor Neji and Gaara. I am enjoying this one very much.