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for Silver Lining

by cynchick

person despairs
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, how talented can one person be? This story and all of your fanart are AMAZING. Usually i read yaoi stories but when i spotted the summary to this one i had to stop and read it...and i'm VERY glad that i did. The parts where Sakura reflects on how she lost her precious people one by one had me majorly depressed...but i know that needed to happen so everyone understood why she had closed herself off from others...why she had become a shell of her former self. You've done wonders with this! I'm very much looking forward to see how it all ends up.
person MrsCake
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo! (fans self) That lemon was majorly hot! I hope Deidara gets his chance again with less interruptions.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Down to the wire aye? *tears* Oh well...That Lemon was sooooooooooooooooooooooo freaking hott man that was too sexy for words just yummy in every sense. Can't wait for more and please definitely do a Epiologue!
UWUC(update when you can)

Loves Arry
person Lunar84
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! He was so close to telling her he loved her!!!! Kisame's timing really does suck ~_~

Great chapter as usual. Loved the chakra infused blow job of the year scene. Good smutty stuff ~_^

It saddens me there will be only one or so more chapters. But, I'm crossing my fingers that poor Sakura will finally recieve her happy ending after all the tragedy she has faced over the years. I'm also hoping this will not be your last fic. I really want to see you continue writing after the conclusion of this story. Even if it were names and numbers from the phone book I'd most likely read it if you wrote it. ^_^

Anyway looking forward to next week!!!
person vic
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
they should have a kid! poor sakura deserves to have more people in her life to counteract the life that was taken away from her!
person zeroharm
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
only two more chaps :-( I suppose all good things must come to an end, but it doesn't make it any easier. Looking forward to a great ending, though your next story is going to have to go above and beyond if you hope to top the angst of this stories premise :-)
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I remember while reading "Perception" some months ago I had wondered about the possibilities for Deidara and Sakura. I found out last night about your sequel and I just completed a marathon read. You have a great way of telling a story. I will be paying for my sleepless night but personally, I had a great read and that makes it worth the payment. I was saddened by the deaths of several favorite characters but I understand that it was needed to make the story what it is. I look forward to the next installment.
person Lunar84
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay Kisame!!!!!!! Wonderful chapter! Probably one of the best of this story even if it didn't have any smutty goodness ^_^

Loved the interaction between the three of them. It felt like they didn't miss a beat from all those years before. I'm really excited that Kisame has decided to join them in their fight.

The ending was very sweet and I'm glad he finally admitted to himself he loved her. I can't wait until he tells her!

Overall excellent work. Then again nothing you write is anything but excellent. Every week I am amazed to see that your talent seems to grow more and more through every chapter you post. Your stories are by far the BEST Naruto fanfics written. I know you said there were only a couple more chapters to go, but I really do hope that you continue to write more Naruto fics in the future. I'm sure i'm not alone in wanting this to happen. You have been blessed with an amazing gift and I hope you continue to share it with us!

Can't wait until next Friday!!!!!
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEHE!! That was too cute. I loved this chappie revelations and planning soon. I sware just one little kiss from deidara to sakura makes me giddy and alittle to happy lol. They are just a really good couple. Can't wait till you make more stories your such a great writer I have a feeling that whatever pairing you choose i'd like so hurry and make more lol. And of course finish this one can't wait for more, hope theres one more lemon though *crosses fingers* please!!!
UWUC(update when you can)

Loves arry
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this chapter because well....hell, Kisame-kun is back!! XD That and the way Deidara's thoughts came together so cleanly...you made Kisame very wise, and this would give others a chance to understand that there is more to a character than meets the eye...not everyone should be taken at face value....well, maybe except for Deidara, he's fucking insane...and I LOVE IT!! Plus that little cute bit at the end had me going "Awwwwww!" *squee* Please keep it up....I loved 'Perception' and now 'Silver Lining' is going great! Thankyouthankyou for making this Deidara/Sakura!