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for Silver Lining

by cynchick

person Anon
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am super psyched that you are writing again...my only small and very minor complaint is that you talked of all this destruction yet with your writing skills you should have written more about that stuff. But really minor complaint...KEEP UP WRITING
person Pomona
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just CAN"T WAIT!!
Uh.. I'd like to express how much I like your style and the pace the story is moving with,
and how I got totally sucked into the story just after two chapters- but then kicks in my
enthusiasm and the "where-is-the-next-chapter" syndrome and I just can't say what I mean without
going hyperactive. >__<
Damn.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. I think that's it very well written even if you did kill off everyone that was important to Sakura but I get why you did that. Update soon.
person zeroharm
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh why must you do this to us.... this one was so waffy, but we know you only do this so that the fall into angst hurts all the more :-) seriously though, great chapter, I am not even going to bother going into how much I love your versions of Deidra and Sakura, but you should know you do in fact kick ass.
person Kaysan
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always, loved it! I am so glad that Kisame is alive. He and Deidara were my two faves from Perception and I can't wait until Sakura gets to see him again. That should be a little light-hearted moment for a story that started with so much angst! I can't tell you how relieved I was that they have some awkwardness between them after 8 years. It would have been odd and unnatural to just jump back into the way things were in the past. So, again, flawless! I'm beginning to think it's impossible for you to write anything BUT amazing stories. Can't wait till the next bit! Hugs & Kisses!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! SOO SOO GLAD THAT YOU DECIDED TO DO A SEQUEL!
person Fino
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I cried a lot the first half of this chapter I will let you know. As soon as i saw the italic 'They' i knew there were going to be some water workd.
Man it was so good though, Oh i love it so much! I love how you write in general becasue it just works well with the sorties and aids in the meaning and emotion of the characters!
person MrsCake
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! An update! Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the upcoming art. (Sigh) Deidara is such a sweetie.
person Guice
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! My favorite part of this chap. was findiing out what you did with Kisame... I laughed a little... ok quite a bit, I'm very slap happy. Anyways, that was a really good Chapter and I can't wait to read the nest one

Guice
person Rasha
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you have started a sequel that great piece of work "Perception." I cannot wait to read the rest of this story. Again, thank you so much.