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by Lyndsay

person Lyndsay
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should write a second chapter to this fic, with Itachi jerking off and jizzing on Sasuke's face. 8D
person Nova
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chibi, clueless Sasuke is so...heartwrenchingly cute. It's the same feeling as in greek tragedy, when you see Agamemnon coming home, winner, proud and happy, and you know he'll die this night, and want to shout at him not to trust that bitch of his wife. Well, Sasuke make me want to shout at him too and warn him, even if I doubt anyone could stop Itachi, if they had known, so I suppose how it went was better for him, a few more days of peace. I don't make any sense, now do I? Anyways, wonderful work...I loved it
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It has been so long since I have dabbled in the Sasuke, Itachi incest that I forgot how dark and dangerously seductive it was. I like the start of this story and I can only hope that you continue to write this story. I wish you the best of luck and hope you update soon.

~ rAiNwAtEr ~