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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww my god eeeeeeeeee okay that like all i can say that was so good man i can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well sasuke wins for being an ASS!!! Man that would piss me off to no end. I'd like to read more.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH Loved this chapter :D
Stupid bastard Sasuke but *sigh* What can you expect from him? XD
You are such an excellent writer being readers right into the drama of the moment. Heh I'm glad/sad that Kanky is scared of his wee little brother *giggles*
Keep up the awesome work I look forward to the next chapter :)
Stupid bastard Sasuke but *sigh* What can you expect from him? XD
You are such an excellent writer being readers right into the drama of the moment. Heh I'm glad/sad that Kanky is scared of his wee little brother *giggles*
Keep up the awesome work I look forward to the next chapter :)
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There was alot going on in the third chapter eh...i like it. This is my third favorite couple really...if Naruto cant be with Sasuke or Itachi then Gaara is without a doubt my third choice for him. I like how Gaara is a tough guy with everyone EXCEPT Naruto in this story. I can only hope their second date goes a little more smoothly lol. Cant wait to read more *grins*
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, can we please be in the car on the way home from the date. I really want to know what Kankuro is thinking, and just how soon does Naruto decide to kill Sasuke.
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More soon please
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More soon please
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. A jealous Sasuke, this is gonna be great! Naruto is gonna kill him.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww this is too sweet!!! (lol) I like this so far! keep em coming!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Next chap, next chap, I want the next chap!!!*wine, while....giggle* I love how it seems that Sasuke his being the bad guy in this fic, and I use the word "bad guy" very losely. I like it, I like it alote. hehehehe Up date soon ok?
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Top 5 'Sweet Tooth' phrases
5. “Don’t let it go to your head too much though. Nothing worse than a narcissistic Goth…”
4. “That’s right…” he pointed at the redhead suddenly, “You’re the gothic brat that Jiraya is always talking about so fondly…"
3. ...his mind was preoccupied by the sudden perverted images of the Gummy-man completely covered in pixie stick powder and offering himself to the redhead...
2. So why are you here? I thought you had a date, or did you ditch her in order to baby-sit?”
1. ‘Take me I am yours Mr. Gummy Man’
hahahaha I love that last one!!!! ^.^ great job on the story and hope you update soon!!
5. “Don’t let it go to your head too much though. Nothing worse than a narcissistic Goth…”
4. “That’s right…” he pointed at the redhead suddenly, “You’re the gothic brat that Jiraya is always talking about so fondly…"
3. ...his mind was preoccupied by the sudden perverted images of the Gummy-man completely covered in pixie stick powder and offering himself to the redhead...
2. So why are you here? I thought you had a date, or did you ditch her in order to baby-sit?”
1. ‘Take me I am yours Mr. Gummy Man’
hahahaha I love that last one!!!! ^.^ great job on the story and hope you update soon!!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooooo, please update soon!