rate_review Reviews

*giggles like a sleep deprived psycho that I am*
Yaaay! I got mentioned, I feel special!
kewl sasuke's pov!
XOXO

Well, this was something! I must admit, I don't like very much the pairing Naru-Kisame (the shark doesn't even look like a man! couldn't you pick...I dunno...Deidara?). I was surprised even by the Naru-Iruka pairing (I can understand it, but Dolphin was too much of a father figure to me, and while I seem don't have any inibition about relationships with sensei -Kakashi- or brotherly incest -as Uchihacest in others fic- I can't see this as probable). Now, it seems a flame, but don't understand me wrong, because it isn't. I would recommend you to update it, and asap, because the general idea I liked very very much. Really, seeing Naruto with Itachi must be a low blow to Sasuke! And I know he deserved what he got, but still...poor boy! I like your writing style. I should have said this first thing, I know.

*squeels* I LOVE WITHIN TEMPTATION *WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT*
i also LOVED the story, short and sweet-IN YOUR FACE SASUKE!
Any chance u'll be doing another story? with any of the couples mentioned before, there's so few stories that have other pairing with naru other than sasuke. U know what would be cute? if someone *hint, hint, nudge, nudge, wink* wrote a story that happens after naruto's fight with neiji at the chunnin(sp?) exams, where neiji realizes he loves naru! I can't write, but it think that would be a GREAT story, just saying. *dangles enourmous bribe in front of u* if only SOMEONE would write it? :P