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for Inconvenient truth

by Hellagoddess

schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEeee!!! One more chapter to go!! (I think?)

This story is excellent. Sasuke's gonna start asking questions about the seal! :X How will Naruto avoid this one?
Also.. I'm kinda wondering what kind of poison's Naruto did injest that kept him out of everything for two weeks. Condsidering the Kyuubi's healing rates... probably something extremely fatal. heheheh.
person SoiSoi
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... I hope your happy. I got off my lazy Shikamaru-like ass and made an account so I could review. (That’s how much I love you!)

But anyway, enough criticism, I'd just like to say... If you don't update, you will surly be an online murderer, I will sue you! Seriously, I've been sooooooooo bored lately, I haven't been able to find any good SasuNaru that where at least a /little/ interesting, and this just takes the cake! It's reaaaaaaaaly interesting (In a… Perverted fan-girl kinda way) I love it too widdle bits! Can't wait for more, I think I've added this to like, every single subscribe or favourite thingy there is... Oh god I think I’m getting teary… D;
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! Sasuke was cute with how he couldn't control himself from groping an unconscious Naruto and it was funny how he wanted to stop himself from caring about Naruto but kept worrying over him the whole time in training.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
person Word_Slave
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you won't give out hints, then you damn well better update soon.

Please???
Slave
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter and look forward to the next (it's about time sasuke realized he loved naruto i mean nothing says love like cleaning).
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one am going to "stick with it til the end" How could I not. I love the emotions that you have giving Sasuke and his ephiphany about Naruto was perfect. Heartfelt, surprising (for him) and believeable. Can't wait for the next.
person RSlover
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know I'm definitely sticking with it till the end
It's so cool especially now that Sasuke realizes his love for Naruto *squee XD*
Keep up the awesome work
ur doin a great job =) (loads of cookies for you =D)
Can't wait for the next update and so on lol
Ja'ne ^_^^_^^_^^_^
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... this is so heartbreakingly... heartbreaking. I almost cried at that last paragraph. Keep 'em wonderful chapters comin' - I'll be reading to the very end. GO, YOU!
person Kimra
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, now he can go over there and fix Naruto up. :P