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for Inconvenient truth

by Hellagoddess

schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yosh!! its about time sasuke realized the truth lol!! update again soon!!
person NinPao
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing. please do.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sasuke realizes the truth! I wonder if poor Naruto is still sick? It was sad that all he had to rely on for help was Sasuke and even Sasuke left him alone a lot. :(
person Crystal24042
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I really enjoy your story. I like this Sasuke, though I think it is a little out of character for him. Then again for the story to work he has to be so I think you've done a great job in keeping him as true as possible. I only have one question-what did Naruto drink to make him so sick? If you don't want to answer because it will give things away about the story I understand.
person Rosebud
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, its about time Sasuke! XD
Great chapter. And I'm glad that he cleaned Naruto's house... I was wondering if he was ever going to get around to doing that or not! Hehe! ^^

update soon please!
person Rosebud
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was really good! In fact I loved it! XD
Please Update soon! ^^
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes a little out of character can be fun... and THIS was fun! I loved Sasuke's reaction to the apartment. And cute little Naru-chan in the shower... so, well, CUTE! (In a hot, naked, soapy boys kinda way)
person Telpei
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Naruto seems really sick, like he's not getting better at all :( I really hope he gets well soon! And poor Sasuke is so confused! I hope he gets over that fast, though, and realizes that he and Naru-chan are meant to be together ^_~ This was another great chapter! Sasuke is being so cute, making rice and worrying about his teammate. I love his little internal wars whenever he convinces himself it's ok to worry about Naruto, and it's ok to go and see him. I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Naruto remember their shower when he gets better??? He certainly didn't seem opposed to the idea when it happened.... Please update soon!
person Word_Slave
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naw, I didn't think it was out of character at all. I loved it!!
Slave
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww... this story is developing so sweetly. =^^=

Poor Naruto.. doesn't look like he's getting any better, is he? Sasuke should start asking some questions soon as to what the hell is going on and why his blonde teammate isn't in the hospital. Heh. Although that shower scene.... hehehehehe


Keep up the good work! <3