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for A New Vessel

by MichiTheThird

schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was rally sex and emotionally charged chapter when it ended and naruto said for now. i felt like screaming noooooo. please update soon that's all i can say.
person lonelylulaby
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I totally forgot about this story. Thanks for updating, was angel Sasuke hearing the cries of the planet? Poor Naruto and Sasuke can't tell reality from dreams. Anywho can't wait till the next installment.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the quick update. i have noticed the way you are interwining moments fron their past lives and what is happening in the present. i have a little trouble with it myself (but i still try) so like seeing it done so well. and glad to know that the questions don't irk (and now that i know that i will take cold hearted advantage). i know this has nothing to do with the story but did you choose your name from watching kyo kara maoh. have you seen the whole series i love it sexy demon king yuri (when the sexier longer hair comes out and the deeper voice) is my favorite with gunter a really close second (i love long white hair). back to your story is itachi or ochimaru going to be the reason that sasuke was killed while he was the anchor. what causes the holes does it have anything to do with the corruption of the angels hearts and so their world is crumbling. will demons try to take over the crubling world lead by either atsukti or kyuubi. i just will limit myself to one more and question and that is are any other of the amgels on earth right now who remeber their pasts as angels and are any of them friends or foes of sasuke and naruto and will they help them to remember there past or not do anything and just let things happen. thanks and can't wait for the next update.
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What will Naruto say? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person lo
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems like it is going to be a lot of fun to read. So far I really like what you have created.
person nawatia
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Before I forget, Please include me in your mailing list for when you update the chapters for this story. Thanks!

I am really enjoying this story so far - I am also glad that it seems like you are going to explain the concept behind "anchors" eventually.
person Telpei
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I love Sakura and Ino for teasing Naruto hehe... and I have to wonder what's going on with Angel!Sasuke and Angel!Naruto! How are they going to escape??? I loved the line "if you're trying to make me panic more... it's working" hehe. Good ol' Naruto. Update soon!! I really can't wait to see what happens, especially when Naruto starts modelling for Sasuke... *drools*

btw, "Your stature is...perfect" OMG! *fangirl squeal* I love it!!!!! *worships SasuNaru* Update!!
person nawatia
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another chappie! I love how you are developing the characters.

Oops, thought you could see the email attached to my login - it is Onawa10@yahoo.com. thanks for the heads up! Looking forward to the next installment.
person Telpei
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, seems interesting!!! I can't wait to find out how you tie in the angel's past with the current-day story line. Will it go beyond dreams and paintings? Are Sasuke and Naruto really angels reborn on Earth, and destined to find each other and fall desperately in love? Could I sound any more corny? (unlikely) ^_^; Great start!! I really like this so far. I feel sympathy for Naruto's car, though... *pats car* and yummy, Naruto as a model! I hope Sasuke asks for private sessions, hehehe ^_~ Update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter sasuke meets naruto. i will always love the different ways they meet (the meeting of yin and yang). i guess sasuke doesn't remeber everything either like i first thought he would does that mean that because he was the anchor he does not recieve specail remberence privelages, so wht is so special about being the anchor. and why was sasuke so sure that he would see naruto again when he died. i can't waitb til the next update.