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for And Familiar It Will Seem...

by ursweetheartless

person Anon
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not into angst, but this gave me chills. Good chills. ^_~
person leanne
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot and sexy, are you going to make this a series or just leave it as a one shot? Either way it's good.
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I luffed it! Awsome awsome awsome!!!!!!!!!!! *Screams* xDDDDDDD

But anyway...Awsome job!
person Word_Slave
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, and that was just mean. I wanted it to actually happen. Good job.
Slave
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh mama, please tell me there's a sequal coming, please. Maybe something where Sasuke figures out a way to enter Naruto's dreams and then decides that he wants to make them a reality. Come on pleeeeease? This is perfect fodder for a small multi-chapter fic and I want more.
person hisoka
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THATS SAD AND...CRAZY.WAS HE RAPED IN HIS DREAM?IM CONFUSED IT THAT WAS EVEN A DREAM AT ALL BUT I LIKED IT
person Kimra
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe.. poor Naruto. I'm empathise. :P
person Rosebud
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, usually I don't like reading ‘dream’ sex... it's kind of disappointing (at least for me) when half-way through the fic; it becomes obvious that the persons asleep. (Ya, I have weird quirks…) However, I loved this story!!!!! And to be honest, I had no clue that it was a dream until I got to the very end—which is like a first, because most people who don’t state at the beginning that it’s a dream, usually end up giving it away at some point prior to the character confirming it. I realize that you might have dropped a small hint in regards to the fact that Sakura ‘didn’t wake up,’ when she probably should of– but it was really subtle, and I didn’t think much of it because I was too enthralled in what Sasuke and Naruto were doing.
Anyway, (sorry for ranting) I just want to commend you on not only writing an awesome story –because you skills are wonderfully and I found myself being drawn in right after the first few lines– but for writing a wet dream that I didn’t end up despising. Keep it up, and I hope to read more one-shots from you in the future! ^^
person akume
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! It was just a make believe dream. Bummer. Thanks anyway.