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I just found this story and I had to comment. I was laughing all the way through both chapters, especially when Naruto mumbled under his breath. How in the world did you come up with all of those things that sounds like what the had said? I could never in my life do something like that. Great story!

NOOOOO don't stop there!! more more...awww...sobz the chapter had to end sometime sobz. but please continue with the story!! :D

Zrina! I love it!!! Where do your ideas flow from?!:)I'm riveted to my seat with each one of your stories. This one is no exception:) Your self proclaim number one yaoi fangirl reader loves this story too:) The way Naruto talks under his breath and repeats something else to Sasuke that sounds like it is great,I'm cracking up as I read that. Oh yea I love the title too.(as my mind wonders into the gutter):)

I thought I'd reviewed the 2nd chp. ... but apparently I hadn't - so sorry for the lateness. Now - where to begin *grins evilly*

"Be a little more careful with my luggage"...? Sasuke *stares* you're worse than a woman Uchiha! Loved how he started to panic when Naruto took so long though... cause he got a little lost. Aww Naturo! *glomps* Heh and Sasuke was eye f***ing every inch of Naruto's skin *snicker* he really was XD

I love that Naruto's always making those muttered comments my favorite was 'Take it or leave it.' which then switched to 'I said I wouldn't fake it, believe it!' that was just brilliant LOL I burst out laughing and my cousin gave me a dodgy look (pretty common really). I also liked the way they'd just both catch themselves staring at the other and then sort of jerked them selfs back into safer ground XD and when Naruto fell asleep against Sasuke... *sigh* sweet.

This is great but then you don't need me to tell you that. And obviously I can't wait for the next installment, thanks for this ;)

hina xXxx

p.ss almost forgot! “Maybe I like anal-” favorite line from second chapter!!! Definitely!!!

An experience like this will definitely bring two people together.
Amazing job so far.
I cant wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the awesome work!
*high five*
:3

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This is so wonderful. :) I love how Naruto keeps mumblings things, then making something up when Sasuke asks, ahah. Brilliant! ^^

They're shmexy!~~ Can't wait to see what happens next, teehee.

My smexiest author of all authors! I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT READING THIS SOONER! But I printed it off and read it on my journey and every now and again I'd glance up to see people giving me weird looks, wanna know why? BECAUSE I WAS SMIRKING AT THE PIECES OF PAPER IN MY HANDS

oh it was so damn funny, "anally rententive* XD oh god, I actually let out a snicker and I got the most reproving look XD

The stitches made me wince and want Sasuke to kiss at the hurt so badly, I so love how you build up the tension in these fics and that theres some background feelings and theres a deeper meaning to it.

and gah I'm so glad you're writing more, I won't stop trying to make you write more either, SoD got up to 73 and thats pretty damn close to 75 XD!

You wrote their interactions so well, and it always comes to life for me when I read your fics, and just wonderfully written in general

*hearts you* again, I suck for not reading it sooner :( BUT I LOVE IT!!!

<3

Thanks for the new chapter, Zrina! The part with them arguing while Naruto was getting his face stitched up was funny but he's lucky he didn't get worse damage from all the moving around and laughing. :D

Lol, you know, you don't HAVE to go FULL THROTTLE with the innuendo and foreshadowing of teh buttsex. It's on a glorified porn site, for crissakes. WE KNOW THERE WILL BE THE SEX. ;)

It did bring a smile to my face, however. You're doing a very good job. :)

This is a really good beginning. =) I love the way you seem to paint pictures with your words. uppdate soon.