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Still love the way that Naruto will mumble one thing and then tell Sasuke that he actually said something else. Also loved the "anal" conversation.

wisker marks. your so awesome I didn't even realise that's what you where doing for a while. then it clicked. the shift key is too far away so you get not capitals in this reveiw. :)

This just keeps getting better and better.

Nicely done, the tension is still mounting and the characterization is wonderful.

Aww, that was actually really sweet coming down to the end there XD. Other than that the chapter was hilarious XD *snickers* "I like anal" XD, I bet you do XD. I was cracking the hell up, the whole time XD. But my absolute favourite funny moment was - “I said I wouldn’t fake it! Believe it!” LMAO!! XD, That was Priceless, absolute A+++ material XD. I also love the fact that Sasuke is so freaking clueless in his snobbiness 0.o;; He really didn't realise that Naruto was insulting hima nd that's why the comments never matched XD. It just makes him even cuter, cause he's so innocent about it. All snobs should be innocent about it, otherwise they're just obnoxious. I also love how neither one of them has a clue that the other is crushing. Or at least fascinated. Naruto's thoughts running away with him was fun, LOL, I can't wait to see how they wake up tomorrow morning XD. I also really like that the whisker marks came from this and that Sasuke stitched them up neatly. That's almost worse than tattooing Sasuke's name on his body. Every time he looks in the mirror he'll think about him. It's awfully romantic. Awfully cause it's sort of scary as hell at the same time. That's really permanent. Sasuke shouldn't be able to come out of this unscathed, Naruto shouldn't be the only one, but then XD, I suppose coming out of it head over heels in love will work XD. And I think Sasuke would be a kisser. Mr. watching from afar, he's got it bad. LOL, never mind he's already scathed and he doesn't even know it *sighs in happiness* Thank you lovey. I'm really enjoying this story ♥.

I love naruto's little comments and than changing them. xD Good chapter can't wait for the next one!

can't wait for the next chapter!

This sounds like another great story. I like the concept so far, it reminds me of a book I read a while ago.
Anyway, I'm happy to see more of your work!

While I wouldn't call it the most original work -- it has it's cliches -- nobody reads fanfiction (works that inherently use established personalities) for originality, and you've definitely caught my interest. I'm enjoying your writing, your dialogue, and your plot, and I'm an appreciative reader, especially for a second chapter.

Great job. :)

ooooo...me likes me likes ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter.