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for Going Down

by Zrina

person Telpei
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! I love this story already!! :D I love the way Sasuke and Naruto keep bickering, it seems so perfect. And I also get the giggles everytime Sasuke had to ask "what was that?" and Naruto would rephrase his 'insult'. Too funny!! I love it :) I can't wait to see how this develops. Suriviving with each other will definitely be a lot... ~harder~ than surviving the crash, I bet! ^_~

Update soon!
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh MAN! This is sooooo good. I can't wait for the next installment. I fly planes, too, so seeing a story like this is just great. You did the tension justice without over exaggerating or over-explaining. PERFECT!!!!!
person Mikra
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this already :)
person gaara89
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nicely done. please do continue soon.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another story from you! This one sounds very interesting! :)
person hisoka
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR GIANT ROCKS!!!CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
person animehead
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like!!!! I told you that I love Naruto in this. He makes me laugh. God I'd die. All that rain, dirt, and muck. Ugh. I am so not an outdoors person. I hope I never end up like these two...unless I'm in a plane crash then I hope I survive it. LOL I always love your plots. Weeeeeeeee Something else for me to fangirl over.

person Taryn Winterblade
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Long time reader (of all of your fics here), first time reviewer here (gomen, gomen, I suck, I know ;) ). As usual, you've managed to create excellence - as with pretty much everything else you write, it's all... way too damn good. :p

I've personally always liked the way you portray Naruto - hotheaded, excitable, and good poster child for mild ADHD, but still intelligent enough to get through life. I've had so many people disagree and think that Naruto is completely stupid that it's nice to see him portrayed in a more believable way, especially when the anime (haven't read the manga :( ) fails at this so many times.

Unfortunately, I suck at actually reviewing things though, so... :D

-TW
person Trollmia
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, a new story from one of my favourite authors. I like the insult-throwings... *snickers* Just like in the show. I like it alot. Yep, I will keep my eyes open for this one in the future :)
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay for DFW!!!! i'm in dallas!!! XD

anyway, this sure is unique and interesting! i can't wait to see where this goes. i think sasuke's got a little crush on naruto, picking on him all the time and whatnot. great job, really!!