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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O, this is going to be fun! I love how Naruto edits his words when he repeats them to Sasuke. Beautiful and extremely funny.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...this is just gonna rock. I love what you've done so far and can't wait for more.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love planes <3
Anyways, lovely first chapter! GAH! I love a pilot Naruto! whee! Please update as soon as you are able. You are so talented! Good description and I love the tension and suspence that you were able to put into words for the crash part of the chapter, well done!
(Cant wait for the next chapter of b&b by the way)
Anyways, lovely first chapter! GAH! I love a pilot Naruto! whee! Please update as soon as you are able. You are so talented! Good description and I love the tension and suspence that you were able to put into words for the crash part of the chapter, well done!
(Cant wait for the next chapter of b&b by the way)
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love planes
Anyways, lovely first chapter! GAH! I love a pilot Naruto! whee! Please update as soon as you are able. You are so talented! Good description and I love the tension and suspence that you were able to put into words for the crash part of the chapter, well done!
(Cant wait for the next chapter of b and b by the way)
Anyways, lovely first chapter! GAH! I love a pilot Naruto! whee! Please update as soon as you are able. You are so talented! Good description and I love the tension and suspence that you were able to put into words for the crash part of the chapter, well done!
(Cant wait for the next chapter of b and b by the way)
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, not surprising I loved it lol, but I loved how Naruto kept mumbling stuff under his breath and then when Sasuke asked he'd just force himself to say something else XD the shoe part I think was my favourite lol 'I lost my shoe' looooool for some reason it just cracked me up. I think if I was stuck with a boss like Sasuke I would've just strangled him, his attitude was definitely not helping the situation but I guess that's just the bastard being a bastard *snicker* gaze seemed to linger too long on Naruto's hair and he seemed to react a bit more than he should to Naruto's hold on him when he almost fell, maybe denial lol.
“Are you kidding? I’d choke on the fumes from all the hair gel you use,”
Favourite line I just loved it!!! i was like heh, take that Uchiha!!! XD
Anyway, liked it and I haven't actually read about this kind of scenario with the two for them which makes it even better!!! Can't wait to see what follows this.
hina xXxx
p.s. *snicker* love the title
“Are you kidding? I’d choke on the fumes from all the hair gel you use,”
Favourite line I just loved it!!! i was like heh, take that Uchiha!!! XD
Anyway, liked it and I haven't actually read about this kind of scenario with the two for them which makes it even better!!! Can't wait to see what follows this.
hina xXxx
p.s. *snicker* love the title
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far! Love it just like I love the rest of your works here.
Can't wait to read the rest ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest ^_^
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! That was hilarious, fun, and refreshing, Zrina! It's so good to see you posting another story, although I can assure you that B&B is quite the attention getter! But this is a great little plot line, I just love sexual-tension!bickering between the boys! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D :D
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a really good story. I love how Naruto mutters to himself and then says something like it when Sasuke asks him what he said.
Sounds like lots to come in their relationship. LoL. Can't wait to read more.
Sounds like lots to come in their relationship. LoL. Can't wait to read more.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Poor Naru-chan, always getting hurt :(
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I be reading and interested. :D