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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start....boy being trapped on a deserted island with those too, OMG!!!
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an amazing first chapter...got me all worked up lol. There were some funny parts too that had me giggling.
If they are stranded somewhere in a cave, that means no Sakura right? Hell yeah! Love it!
If they are stranded somewhere in a cave, that means no Sakura right? Hell yeah! Love it!
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the double entandre (sp??) anyway. I can't wait for more! Please soon. Sasuke needs to be taken down a peg
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Your stories are always so well written and entertaining. Loved the way Naruto would say something and then tell Sasuke he had said something else when Sasuke asked what he had said.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep you must continue this is awesome.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow , amazing so far, very detailed and great character descriptions, i literally can't wait till you update, please do so soon, really looking forward to seeing how they learn to get along :P