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for Going Down

by Zrina

person Negaii
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this line, "An Uchiha’s ass didn’t come cheap." It definitely captures all the humor in you fic. I loved it!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cool! I hope you got more stories, because I am ready for more.

You are the coolest for this story hope like I said, got more.
person xpyne
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!! wow, that was totally hot. like, i-am-now-horny hot. like, i am now totally embarrassed over how hot that was. ^/////////^ oooh the way you write them is so dynamic and cute!! ♥ i could really relate to Sasuke in this one. and did i mention what incredible sex scenes there are in this!?!?! DAMN but you are good. i have nothing else to say, really. i'm just going to drool on my pillow over here for a while. *__,_*
person Myra
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Yeah, I bet Sai had fun listening to that....
person ProstoChudo
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's... perfect =)
person Gwyllion
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....what an awesome and funny fic! I especially LOVE the "getting wood" part. LOL! That was so hilarious! Ahh...Naruto...you're so naive....XD I enjoyed this so very much. Thanks so much for sharing!
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I already reviewed on Y!, but this deserves another round of praise! I loved the way Naruto got lost in the rainforest. So typical. And the chemistry was perfect. I adored the ending, and kerplunk is a perfect descriptive sound effect. The cave was just a fabulous way to end this. I really loved this story. What a fun and enchanting read.

Also, I can't wait to read the second Sound of Dreams! Though I don't mean to bother you. I'm just rereading all your stuff in sheer joy. Happy reader!
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ That's hilarious!!! I think it was a perfect ending. I loved this story and I hope to hear more
person Taylor
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Y'know...you'd think that after reading this the 10th time, I"d be bored of this fic....but that is so far away from the truth it's unbelievable.

Wicked job. KEep up the awesome work.
person lo
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! The whole story was well written, well paced and never lagged. Nicely done!