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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
la la la la la So I guess this isn’t a good time to point this out, but uh, you have 6 chapters there Z… SIX. *grins happily*
My absolute favourite part about this chapter was when Naruto saw Sasuke sitting there. You described it so perfectly. Seriously. When I first read that, it felt like a little clip of film. Absoutely loved the description of Sasuke just sitting there all sexy but not. lol I’m so in love with Sasuke in this fic. He’s assholeness is perfect to a T. He’s just so sexy and bastardly and it only makes me love him more. I swear to god Z if you turn me into a Sasuke fangirl, we’re gonna have problems XD.
I just adored the way Naruto jumped into action after Sasuke spoke. So damn intense the way you broke it with the kiss. I love the way you write kisses, they’re not the generic type. They’re all clash and lips and teeth and everything that happens in kisses.
LOL! Sasuke topping from the bottom again *snickers* *pats him* sure baby, you’re in charge. With Naruto’s dick up your ass, you’re in charge.
Z baby, that smut scene O_O holy shit. My panties are still trying to hug you XD I love that even though it was hot, it was so sweet as well, with Sasuke missing Naruto, aww, that’s your punishment Sasuke! You fill the smut with such passion. My favourite part of the smut was the way Sasuke directed Naruto’s fingers LOL!
“Shh,” he said quietly, “we’re not stopping. But I need you to put lube on my cock so I can fuck you.”
mmm that like for me was incredibly hot, (I will find another adjective for hot! Believe it!)
And you put the hat on him! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY ok scratch the pilot!Naruto scene, I’m gonna try drawing that one instead. :D The epilogue was as usual pure Z genius.
Thank you so much love for writing this for me. Love you!!!!!
Adi XX
My absolute favourite part about this chapter was when Naruto saw Sasuke sitting there. You described it so perfectly. Seriously. When I first read that, it felt like a little clip of film. Absoutely loved the description of Sasuke just sitting there all sexy but not. lol I’m so in love with Sasuke in this fic. He’s assholeness is perfect to a T. He’s just so sexy and bastardly and it only makes me love him more. I swear to god Z if you turn me into a Sasuke fangirl, we’re gonna have problems XD.
I just adored the way Naruto jumped into action after Sasuke spoke. So damn intense the way you broke it with the kiss. I love the way you write kisses, they’re not the generic type. They’re all clash and lips and teeth and everything that happens in kisses.
LOL! Sasuke topping from the bottom again *snickers* *pats him* sure baby, you’re in charge. With Naruto’s dick up your ass, you’re in charge.
Z baby, that smut scene O_O holy shit. My panties are still trying to hug you XD I love that even though it was hot, it was so sweet as well, with Sasuke missing Naruto, aww, that’s your punishment Sasuke! You fill the smut with such passion. My favourite part of the smut was the way Sasuke directed Naruto’s fingers LOL!
“Shh,” he said quietly, “we’re not stopping. But I need you to put lube on my cock so I can fuck you.”
mmm that like for me was incredibly hot, (I will find another adjective for hot! Believe it!)
And you put the hat on him! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY ok scratch the pilot!Naruto scene, I’m gonna try drawing that one instead. :D The epilogue was as usual pure Z genius.
Thank you so much love for writing this for me. Love you!!!!!
Adi XX
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Sasuke was sneaky!! Guess he wanted to recreate the time he and Naruto spent in the cave before. :D Love the happy ending, thanks for this story!!! :)
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hihi.. I loved it,so cute.. wow! you have a certain way of writing things that I just love. mhm! keep up the good work, can`t wait to read more from you. :))
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Sasuke that sly devil!! That was a fantabulousy awesome ending!! I'm sad its over. but it was great while it lasted!! I love your fics, they make me happy =D Yay for BB updates! Imma definately be looking forward to reading it! With this fic over and the new year around the corner does that mean your gonna start working on the sequel to The Sound of Dreams? That would be so lovely =) Keep up the awesome work!!! *Tosses red ann pink hearts in the air* <3
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* XD *showers you in kisses and huggles*. LOL, I'm really happy XD. Happy in a kind of, shhh... Let's not talk about it, let's just sit here and soak it in, kind of way XD. That was really, really good. Good, good, like fresh bread good XD. LOL, I feel all warm and satisfied.
That was a wonderful ending and I can't stop smiling XD. Thank you love, for the update. It was sweet, and funny, and sexy, and soo perfect.
Fav points - "I'd still be in charge" XD. Naruto putting the captain's hat on Sasuke, and earlier when it slid down over his eyes *snicker*. I couldn't help thinking, he took off his jacket and tie, but kept the hat XD. I think you're giving me a little hat fetish XD. - When Sasuke went off about only wanting Naruto - that man, that body, that cock. *huggles* - the fact that Naruto refused to be a glorified ken doll/vibrator. *snicker* belly dancing lessons XD. And of course, last but maybe my most favourite of them all - kerplunk ♥ *Loves all over you* ;) :).
That was a wonderful ending and I can't stop smiling XD. Thank you love, for the update. It was sweet, and funny, and sexy, and soo perfect.
Fav points - "I'd still be in charge" XD. Naruto putting the captain's hat on Sasuke, and earlier when it slid down over his eyes *snicker*. I couldn't help thinking, he took off his jacket and tie, but kept the hat XD. I think you're giving me a little hat fetish XD. - When Sasuke went off about only wanting Naruto - that man, that body, that cock. *huggles* - the fact that Naruto refused to be a glorified ken doll/vibrator. *snicker* belly dancing lessons XD. And of course, last but maybe my most favourite of them all - kerplunk ♥ *Loves all over you* ;) :).
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was so cute. You're my favorite Naruto/Sasuke writer and I get excited ever time I see any kind of update from you and I'm never disappointed. Great work, I can't wait for whatever you post next.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I enjoyed this alot, I will definitely save this to my bookmarks and read it again sometime.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Z it was wonderful!! I feel all warm and cozy inside:)I loved Sasuke being in charge (wink wink):) Happy Hoildays:)
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful--Amazing!! And totally hot to boot!! Awesome job!! XD
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*hugs*
I love your writting ergo I love you! :D
I really enjoyed this story and I'm glad you finished it. The epilogue was fun and fluffy, which was a nice way to end the story.
Anyway. No criticisms and I'm bad at compliments. But, yeah, love the story and the writing and will continue to read your stuff. :D
Kimra
I love your writting ergo I love you! :D
I really enjoyed this story and I'm glad you finished it. The epilogue was fun and fluffy, which was a nice way to end the story.
Anyway. No criticisms and I'm bad at compliments. But, yeah, love the story and the writing and will continue to read your stuff. :D
Kimra