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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly love the ending. Good job Sasuke!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved this story! You are one of my favorite writers. I loved how Sasuke just dropped his phone into the water so they could stay in the cave like thier first time. I also love how Sasuke is the 'submissive', yet he's not- he's still on control. There's not many like that, at least that I've seen. If you know any other good SasuNaru or NaruSasu stories, and you have time, could you please tell me a few you like? Thanks if you do. I can't wait for you to get the sequel to SoD out!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YES! I LOVE YOU!
“I would offer you a drink,” Sasuke murmured in a smoky tone, “but somehow I think we’re already past that.”
--*innerhappysquealofdoom*! Eee!
“Don’t forget who’s in charge here,” Sasuke whispered against his lips huskily.
--*innerhappysquealx10*!! EEE!
“Did you just pinch my ass?!”
--*falls off the chair laughing like crazy* ...*tears of myrth* Naruto, you're the best!
...and the light blue Sponge Bob boxers."
--*snicker*
"The last time I went down with you, we crashed in an airplane and were stranded in a cave for several days"
--*ROFLMAO* That's right! XD
Naruto lifted a hand up and cupped his cheek. And when he met those deep blue eyes with so much emotion in them, he felt awkward, breathless and perhaps a little stunned.
--*sniffle* ...*waterfall tears* My heart...x.o ...oh, my heart...
Frowning slightly, Sasuke did so only to watch Naruto take off his hat and slip it onto his own head.
--Someone draw this PLEASE! *stops and thinks for a minute* Wait a sec, I could draw it myself! *evil cackling*
“Have you ever thought of taking belly dancing lessons?”
--*dies laughing yet again* Can't...laugh...any harder...must not...wake up...family members...*laughs some more*
Reluctantly, Sasuke had followed, figuring it was a populated island and that little could go wrong.
--UH-OH!!
Over the small roar of the waterfall, Naruto didn’t hear the little kerplunk of the phone hitting the water and being carried away in the rapidly moving stream.
--LMFAO! OMG...no he didn't!!!
Oh, what a wonderful fic that was from beginning to end!! I loved it SOOOO MUCH! It's one of my absolute, ABSOLUTE, top favorites now. I BEG YOU for a sequel or a side story or two! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!
“I would offer you a drink,” Sasuke murmured in a smoky tone, “but somehow I think we’re already past that.”
--*innerhappysquealofdoom*! Eee!
“Don’t forget who’s in charge here,” Sasuke whispered against his lips huskily.
--*innerhappysquealx10*!! EEE!
“Did you just pinch my ass?!”
--*falls off the chair laughing like crazy* ...*tears of myrth* Naruto, you're the best!
...and the light blue Sponge Bob boxers."
--*snicker*
"The last time I went down with you, we crashed in an airplane and were stranded in a cave for several days"
--*ROFLMAO* That's right! XD
Naruto lifted a hand up and cupped his cheek. And when he met those deep blue eyes with so much emotion in them, he felt awkward, breathless and perhaps a little stunned.
--*sniffle* ...*waterfall tears* My heart...x.o ...oh, my heart...
Frowning slightly, Sasuke did so only to watch Naruto take off his hat and slip it onto his own head.
--Someone draw this PLEASE! *stops and thinks for a minute* Wait a sec, I could draw it myself! *evil cackling*
“Have you ever thought of taking belly dancing lessons?”
--*dies laughing yet again* Can't...laugh...any harder...must not...wake up...family members...*laughs some more*
Reluctantly, Sasuke had followed, figuring it was a populated island and that little could go wrong.
--UH-OH!!
Over the small roar of the waterfall, Naruto didn’t hear the little kerplunk of the phone hitting the water and being carried away in the rapidly moving stream.
--LMFAO! OMG...no he didn't!!!
Oh, what a wonderful fic that was from beginning to end!! I loved it SOOOO MUCH! It's one of my absolute, ABSOLUTE, top favorites now. I BEG YOU for a sequel or a side story or two! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Preferably up close,” Sai muttered. “What was that?” Naruto asked, looking over at the dark-haired man. Sai flashed him a wide, slightly creepy smile. “Definitely one of those.”
--Ah, Sai...you've been around Naruto for too long.
Wonderful update! My innerhappysqueal made an appearance throughout the entire phone conversation. ^^ Can't wait to read the conclusion...not to mention pray and hope for side stories for this one! Praying and hoping a lot!!
--Ah, Sai...you've been around Naruto for too long.
Wonderful update! My innerhappysqueal made an appearance throughout the entire phone conversation. ^^ Can't wait to read the conclusion...not to mention pray and hope for side stories for this one! Praying and hoping a lot!!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!
ok that scene in the beginning, with Naruto talking about how he had fucked Sasuke 8 times already had me in hysterics, seriously, I couldn't stop laughing at that XD it was almost as bad as the cat in the panties thing
You write the best Kakashis. Seriously. and The cameo with Sakura XD!! Manhandling Naruto :D
I'm still amazed by how much I love Sasuke in this fic. It's seriously so cool for me. I love how much of an asshole he is. Don't look at me like that, he's such a git and I love him for it! O_O Oh god, you see what you did? YOU MADE ME LOVE SASUKE! *points finger of accusation*
That phone conversation was so sweet
“I hear it’s not safe in the skies any longer,” a familiar deep voice, teased lightly. Was my favourite line for this one. I just adore it :D
I completely love the way you work in Naruto saying something and then changing it, it's just pure Zrina genius!
My other favourite part:
“Shut the fuck up, Sai. I’ve got more dick than you’ll ever have.”
“Only stuck in you,” his co-pilot retorted before stepping inside.
Sai! XD
Ok, I'm done fangirling now, WHERES MY PORN?! XD!!!
Love you!
Adi XX
ok that scene in the beginning, with Naruto talking about how he had fucked Sasuke 8 times already had me in hysterics, seriously, I couldn't stop laughing at that XD it was almost as bad as the cat in the panties thing
You write the best Kakashis. Seriously. and The cameo with Sakura XD!! Manhandling Naruto :D
I'm still amazed by how much I love Sasuke in this fic. It's seriously so cool for me. I love how much of an asshole he is. Don't look at me like that, he's such a git and I love him for it! O_O Oh god, you see what you did? YOU MADE ME LOVE SASUKE! *points finger of accusation*
That phone conversation was so sweet
“I hear it’s not safe in the skies any longer,” a familiar deep voice, teased lightly. Was my favourite line for this one. I just adore it :D
I completely love the way you work in Naruto saying something and then changing it, it's just pure Zrina genius!
My other favourite part:
“Shut the fuck up, Sai. I’ve got more dick than you’ll ever have.”
“Only stuck in you,” his co-pilot retorted before stepping inside.
Sai! XD
Ok, I'm done fangirling now, WHERES MY PORN?! XD!!!
Love you!
Adi XX
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is awsome please please update
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=^_^= hehehe Sasuke is so awkwardly out of control in this one. Its great.
Excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you make me very happy :D keep doing what you're good at!! hehehe..
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is just so good. Very funny.
I'm looking forward to your next update.
I'm looking forward to your next update.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I misses you last Zrinaday:) For me it's been holiday parties(fun), school concert(loud and cute) and a baby shower(thank god it's not me). It was wonderful to see you had posted a chapter today!!:) Kakashi didn't give Naruto the cell number so Sasuke would have to call him,I wonder??? I crack up everytime Naruto doulble talks "Hopefully you" then repeats it as something else. I loved it!