rate_review Reviews

Nicely done! I love the interactions between these two. The tension was great and the releas was wonderful. I can't wait to see more.

great story!

Yay for hot smexy updates!! You always write such great lemons xD! The beginning of the chapter was freaking hillarious, don't ya love it when two people are having a conversation about two completely different things? xD You did a fabulous job! I'm looking forward to the last chapter =D *glomps*

My queen!! ::prostrates self:: i luff you so much. LOLZ i read the summary, and i was like, plane crash?? and all i could think of was that book The Hatchet, hahahaha. well, the summary situation didnt sound like a winner and i actually would have skipped this gem had i not noticed it was by YOU my most favorite of all naruto writers. ::gasp:: so of course i clicked, read, drooled, rolled around on the floor in pleasure and read some moar!! naruto in a pilot's uniform is SEXY and i love his way of coping with uchiha bullshit by muttering under his breath. his rhyming/close to explanations had me laughing reeally hard! XD particularly the cheesy I wouldnt fake it! believe it! i laughed so hard tears gathered! oh jeez, and the have you ever gotten wood? conversation!!!!! one of the funniest, well-done misunderstanding conversations of all time! ::thumbs up:: i need to catch up on your B&B now. :d RL is keepin' me too busy. >:( but you are so wonderful! i wish i could write half as well or a fraction of as swiftly as you do!

ohh yes,, and the sex scene was steamy hot! i love the "i've created a monster" comment! sasuke as a liberated, cock-craving butt-slut is so damn sexy on so many levels. i just love it when the uptight, grouchy types become uninhibited cock sluts. ;D damn, will naruto ever be able to satisfy sasuke? or has he simply created one more area of expertise for sasuke to demand all the time, and then complain cuz he's not getting sexed as often or as long or exactly whenever he wants? lol love the fic, love the interaction, love the AU. ♥ i happily await more!

Kawaii! Update soon please! Their sooo cute together! Keep it up Onegai!

so ok if you had actually left it at the point where Naruto decides to take initiative, you would have had me climbing at the walls within a few days XD Heck, if you had just posted that, it would have been enough for every fangirl to stalk the hell out of you :D Seriously, that mini cliff hanger you ever so kindly gave me during the week had me thinking about it constantly XD

I choked, I died, I coughed and I snorted at the entire "wood" conversation, just so perfectly funny. It was just written in a way that I could see it happening, which only made it funnier, and ya know, Adi falling out of her seat XD

The best thing about NaruSasu is that Sasuke is a pushy uke XD and I'm completely in love with how you wrote him in this fic, AND ESPECIALLY THIS CHAPTER. I thought that Sasuke would have his ass handed to him when he proposed his one time thing and "we all have needs" theory, and well, Naruto pounded it instead ^_^

Ok so I wanted to quote my favourite parts of the smexing, but uh, I kinda copied and pasted the whole thing so I thought you might not appreciate that XD but I did love these lines!

An Uchiha’s ass didn’t come cheap.
“I can’t wait to own that,” he mumbled, staring at the way Sasuke’s slacks fit snuggly across his bottom.
‘I’ve created a monster,’ Naruto thought faintly.
“Fuck, yes!” Naruto suddenly yelled, his cock spraying deep into Sasuke. “Shake that ass!” (lol you write the best climaxes!)

Excuse me Z I uh gotta go reread this chapter :D:D:D:D

Adi XX

OmigodIthinkIloveyou.

XD as expected from sasUKE,
initiating ugh their so-called fun...
riding naruto. *noce-bleed*
uhuhhuh... sasuke is so sexy with the image.

*squealing*
*fainted*
*more squealing*

hot. HOT. HOT.

that's all i can say. ^__^ and i would really LOVE to read about sasuke in bells. that would be like, hot to the nth power.

and i really like how a seemingly harmless thing like sasuke getting firewood and naruto helping him carry it in came back to bite someone on the ass like that. it was quite clever.

i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Hot, very hot. Loved the sex scene it was hot : D love naruto's random comment changes. Can't wait for the next chap