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I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

God first of all sorry for the lateness!!! But I finally got around to reading chapter 3!!! So this is review for chapter three lol, so yeah wow, opening scene it made my eyes widen when Sasuke actually let his control slip a little and he nudged Naruto’s mouth closer to his erection my eyes went like this >>> O_O and then Naruto thought this ‘The little bastard hadn’t been the innocent victim of a sleep molestation after all.

The little prick had been actually enjoying it!’ and I just cracked up lol because yeah, Sasuke was actually the one doing the molesting in my opinion XD and then at the end the argument – it seems like its ingrained in Sasuke to keep taking jabs at Naruto and the fact that Naruto snapped back this time pleased me because seriously even I was starting to seriously want to kick the Uchiha’s ass. But then Sasuke’s apology at the end soothed me so yeah! ^_^ Heh loved it so now I’m going to move on onto chapter four *laughs evilly* hehehe

Hina xXxx

p.s. good thing about how long it took me to read this is that I get two read two brand new chapters in a row XD

Chp. 4...Well - heh I want to reaffirm my existance too!!!

XD 'Shake that ass' LOL I so was not expecting Naruto's little detour of Sasuke moving his hips like Shakira lool and then I got this image of Sasuke with the bells but not in that way - I don't know if you've watched that anime Enzai? Well it's mostly non con but there's this bit where one of the guys has a ribbon with a bell on it tied to his cock and he's told to fuck a dildo and make it so that his cock bounces so that the bell can ring - well I got and image of Sasuke doing that on Naruto's cock ^_^''' my dirtiness is incurable i think but the SMUT *drool* the way Sasuke didn't even seem to want the stretching even though he hadn't done it before and just pressed himself down on Naruto's cock *dies*

Next chp is last one huh? Can't wait to see how they treat each other the day after - I'm not particularly worried about Naruto but more Sasuke - you know that stick up his ass likes to cause problems (unless it's Naruto's stick cause that just makes him scream for more heh)but yeah - great!!!

Hina xXxx

p.s. don't know if I mentioned but I really like the way you've written Naruto here, is dialogue is one of my favourite aspects of this fic lol just thought i'd let you know - 'i can't wait to own that' = 'where do you want it down at?' *snicker*

Z you just get better every week! That was pretty intense(mmm) The hole miss understanding of what each other was talking about lol! Then the belly danceing gave me a great visual:) What I liked the best is when Sasuke asked when would be the next time.(yea baby!) Your self proclaim number #1fan is very happy this chapter was hot~~!

I'm reviewing this everywhere!

I consider this doing my fangirl duty and showing you the love you deserve for being the wonderful genius goddess of fanfic that you are! So, LOVE!!

My LJ review is more extensive, but seriously, LOOOVED IT!

Hot and sexy and extra brownie points for completly confused Sasuke. He's the best!

Hee hee.

Love!

OMG! That was hawt!!!!

LOL, well well well XD. What a lovely way to end a day XD. Thank you sweetheart for the update and the smut *showers in kisses*. Their conversation at the beginning was Hilarious XD. I almost died when Naruto wanted to not embarrass himself by talking about how Sasuke got "wood" earlier *face palm*. And then when Sasuke looked at the bloody sticks, oh God XD, *sigh* hehehe XD. That was just so wrong, in so many ways, I mean, come on... boyscouts?!!? LMAO!! And then when Naruto crept up on him, God, priceless. The smut was hawt as all hell and funny too XD. You really are a unique character XD. Shakira?? LOL, *shakes head* It's a damn good thing Sasuke didn't understand what he was saying *snicker* 'I've created a monster' XD. You have no idea sweetheart. And umm, ano sa, ano sa, does the fact that he was decidedly "not limp any longer", mean we get more smex next time??? LOL, Yes I R a Smut Fiend!! But um, you knew this XD. I had a really hilarious vision of rescuers walking in on cuddling nekkid people XD *snicker* but that would be bad and cause problems. *huggles u to bits* Thank you again honey, *smirk* who would've thunk that Sasuke would be such a rush-un XD. I love this, can I thank you again?? This was a such a shitty weekend *chuu*

I'm glad it's short. Because your write awesome long stories, but you also write awesome short stories... and this way we skip 90% of the angst. :P

Eh. That's me appreciating the pace of the story... incase you can't tell.

Love the story. Excellent work and here's a cookie. *gives cookie*

More please.

Hot!!! So I guess Sasuke no longer wants it to be a one time thing? I'm happy that they have gotten even closer. :)