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for Going Down

by Zrina

schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular! The conversation about the wood...man i just laughed and laughed and laughed through the entire thing.

Looking forward to the last chapter!
person Jiro
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha! The "boy scouts helping out with the wood" conversation made my day ::: dies laughing::: The hot narusasu sex is awesome, by the way. You are a cyber goddess.
person aiesha
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME AWSOME AWSOME!!!! I love this fic... please keep going!!! (inside voice: yeah, that's what he said ^^) anywasyz, i can't get enough about this fic... until next time, ja ne!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'A vivid vision of a pre-adolescent Sasuke Uchiha groping other pre-adolescent boy scouts out in the woods suddenly bloomed across Naruto’s mind.'

--LMFAO! OMG! That sentence ALONE is enough to entertain my perverted brain for HOURS.

'I certainly wouldn’t be opposed to a one-time thing.'

--*shakes head sadly* Sasuke, Sasuke...you are digging your own grave, do you know that?

"If you’re actually wanting to have sex with me,” Naruto suddenly spoke in a low husky voice that caused a harmonious resonance within both Sasuke’s chest and groin, “then you’re going to have to be a man about it first.”

--Oh ho ho...you TELL him Naruto. Hell, just say that sentence again for the benefit of fangirls everywhere...*drools*

'An Uchiha’s ass didn’t come cheap.'

--LMFAO! Cosmos...I don't know how I manage to break from a trance to laugh for so long over just a sentence. This is why I love your fics. This is EXACTLY why! XD

“I can’t wait to own that,” he mumbled, staring at the way Sasuke’s slacks fit snuggly across his bottom. “Hm?” Sasuke asked, looking up from the first aid kit. “Where do you want this down at?” Naruto asked, holding up the thin, blue blanket.

--And THAT is exactly why I love THIS fic so much! *tears of myrth* I love Naruto's mumbling such funny things to himself and I love how he covers for them even more!! X3

‘I’ve created a monster,’ Naruto thought faintly.

--Keeheeheeheehee! That you did, Naruto! That you did!

“Fuck, yes!” Naruto suddenly yelled, his cock spraying deep into Sasuke. “Shake that ass!”

--*nearly dead from laughter* I have NEVER had to work so hard to keep myself from laughing out loud! *breathes* Ho-ly Cosmos. Absolutely hillarious. Naruto's overactive imagination is about as bad as mine!



person llyoung
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The "wood" conversation at the beginning of the chapter was so funny. Thanks for the udpate.
person despairs
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahaha! Funny! I found myself laughing when Naruto and Sasuke were talking about different meanings of 'getting wood' and then panting at that smokin hot lemon and then right back to laughing again as Naruto yelled out, "Fuck yes!" and "Shake that ass!" lmao my cats are all staring at me like i've suddenly lost my mind :P And I noticed Sasuke changed his mind about them having a "one time thing" yeah! woot! lol

As for the length of this story..i'm perfectly satisfied with it. Great ,GREAT job on this one. I Cannot wait to see the ending.
person llyoung
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving your story. Hopefully they will not be rescued too soon.
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I'm sucked into this one too. And I'm insanely afraid of starting The Sound of Dreams at such a late hour...so, I'll stop for now. I hope an update of any kind happens before I eat up The Sound of Dreams (though I'm pretty sure it could happen...so many chapters!)!
person lo
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, I like the pace to the story and the story line. This is just good writing.
person Lana
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I love it so far! You found a really great way to work Naruto's whisker scars into the story. Hope you write more soon!