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for Wide of the Mark

by Hellagoddess

person Ruffner
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is rediculously funny and i cannot wait for the next chapter. please update soon.
person oohshiny
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU you said you enjoyed writing this story on a review in meiun, right?? well, ENJOY YOURSELF MORE AND GIT CRACKIN'!!! also if your wondering how i knew about yer review, the review made me curious enough to look at this story. be thankful ta reviewing curiosity. and WRITE GRAHHHHH @_@ also email me whenever you update, plz. my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
person malimillions
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! Oh my gosh! You updated! You updated! *Does a happy lil' goober dance* Oh, thank you so much! And wow... Your authors note made me blush and smile, thank you!

And hmm... Things keep getting worse and worse (of course) for our lil' angst muffin, sassy-cakes... While i do like his plan of politely waiting until the bit of the marriage ceremony about if there's any objections, i still think he should have a backup plan, of course.... So he can better watch his lil' Sexy no jutsu'ed rump... Especially now that it IS a major problem of his chakra level being sooo damn low and drained, and him (or her, that is) being so tired all the time from the effort to keep that jutsu up, 24/7, that it might make any escape plans (if the speaking up at the part of the marriage ceremony plan falls through) really difficult... :( Then again, i -almost- feel bad that i'm rooting for neji here to get in sassy's pants.... XD

Oh, interesting note about the name! It's a name that's dear to you, hmm? I'm sure there's an interesting personal story behind that, but never mind. It sounds pretty, and sort of classy, cute and elegant, yet sassy.... perfect for who sasuke's currently playing as a girl. Very nice!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it's short, but still good. Nicely done, and keeps me wanting more, which is the point, yes?
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. YESS. This is what I've been waiting for. Awesome way you've described Neji's personality. Oh god, please let Sasuke get spanked. I totally see it with that mouth of his. Please update soon. I like your writing style, I'm working on a story callen Meiun and would love to hear your thoughts.
person malimillions
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! Damn, the plot thickens! Sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier... I'm quite the lazy bum, and honestly, I've been spending my time reading and re-reading this chapter so many times, and then rec-ing it to friends, and making sure they read it and rated it and loved it too (and they did love it too... and i didn't even have to twist their arms!), and then i'd just re-read it yet -again-...

So! *quick breath*

Lovely. Again, this chapter is just wonderful, and on par in intrigue, quality and smoothness as the previous chapters were... but this time we get a special treat... Neji! Ha ha! YOu made him perfectly in character, as have you done sasuke (or sasuko, in this case) and hiashi... a hard feat to do! And the brief notes and descriptions of neji's expression(s), his thoughts and flash of attraction are just wonderful, as well as his intrigue, and general wondering about the attraction, but also familiarity of this girl.... Hmmm! Very, very nice!

As a last note ; does the name that sasuke chose so quickly for himself in that pinch, and then cursed himself for choosing such a stupid name... does the name itself mean anything? Just curious. : )
person Dragon
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please continue writing it and post againg soon.
person unknownthreat@???
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god this fanfic is great, keep writing KEEP WRITING, PLEASE OR ILL CRY.
person alexandra
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^__^ i'm loving this!! pls update! <33
person LadyApollonia
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! Hey, I was reading that! Update!!!!! Pretty please!!!! This is interesting!!!!! I can't wait for more. ^_^