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for Wide of the Mark

by Hellagoddess

person Word_Slave
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this has the potential to be hysterical!! I think though that if you changed the summary a bit you might get more readers. Something like a henge gone terribly wrong???
Hope I haven't offended you.
Slave
person Carmilla Dulac
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep it coming!!! I like where this is going. It's so hard to find NejiSasu stories =)
person unkownthreat???@
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very intersting, cant wait to read the next chapter.
please write it soon.
person Dragon7
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.