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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THINGS I WISH BUT I KNOW ILL MAY RECEIVE A WARM HAND TOUCHES ME AND LETS ME KNOW NOT TO WORRY. HE WRAPS HIS STRONG ARMS AROUND ME COMFORTING ME EVER SO GENTLY. HE LISTENS AS IF EVERY WORD I SAY AS IF IT WAS IMPORTANT TO THE WORLD. HE KISSES ME GENTLY DESTROYING ALL MY FEARS ABD DESPAIR. HE WHISPERS HE LOVES ME AS HE CUDDLES AND KISSES ME EVER SO GENTLY. AND AS WE FALL ASLEEP HE TELLS ME THAT WE ARE TOGETHER FOREVER.
^^ That’s the most beauitful thing I ever read!
^^ That’s the most beauitful thing I ever read!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I would love to look over your story just send it in a email!
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its very good, and has promise. The only thing I would say needs to be worked on is longer chapters and a little more description and feeling.
Aside form that great job, and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
-Akiru-
Aside form that great job, and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
-Akiru-