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schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, I like how Naruto isn't a bumbling idiot, but isn't a perfect little mary sue. I can't wait to read more!
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i was wondering about the whole killing of the Uchiha clan, and why Itachi seem more emotional or 'human' YAY for swearing!
Enjoying your fic ^__^
person tash1021
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i love it update sooon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love your story so far. It's very interesting I can't wait for Naruto and Itachi to meet again.

Unfortunately, your were still a little '!' happy in this chapter but it's getting better.
;)
Keep up the good work.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good so far. I have a couple of questions and comments though. If it was part his mission to watch Naruto and make sure he was safe why didn't Itachi also inform the Hokage about what his family was planning? I'm sure the Hokage and council would have wanted them killed if they were planning treason. It would have been different if the Hokage asked him to join Akutski. Why do you keep blocking out the word fucking? you can write some man saying hes going to rape a kid, but you cut out fucking. It kinda disrupts the writing when you're reading and its presented like that all of a sudden.
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blows nose on tissue* this story is so sad, yet so touching
person Stacy
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i very much like this story.
itachi has so many emotions.
it's nice to see!
update asap!!
person hpn827
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! ItaNaru. I'm really excited about the next chapter.
person gaara89
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. I hope to see an update sometime soon.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am a hardcore sasukexnaruto fan but i find your story interesting. i liked the begining it really hooked me in. i hope you update this soon.