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for Walks in the Woods

by inediblefrogs

schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There just isn't enough Ibiki fiction out there, I LOVE HIM with anyone! Great story, goes well with the others in the series!
person Kaeruotaku
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love Neji oh so very much, and reading about him getting pounded into/him doing the pounding just lights up my day...your story was awesome, and I love the descriptive characters!

There was just one thing...the pairing totally surprised me! O.O
Oh my god...Ibiki?! Well...it's strange, but i can always imagine someone elses head on his body...Nice Work! ^^
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Favorite one yet I love Ibiki!!! He is my very favorite character! More Ibiki! Please, please, please!!!
person Hestia
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I never figured out this was in your other Narutoverse! So after doing Kakashi, Ibiki went off to the woods . . .

Wow!!

And once more, I love this. I think this is my fourth reread now, maybe fifth . . .

Can we get a sequel someday??? Since you never really just do PWP, maybe you could focus on the their relationship being discovered by just about anybody . . .

schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can not express how fun this was to read! Kind of like unwrapping a present! And there was absolutly no hint at all about who the mysterious man was until the very end! You beautifully cruel mistress of smut. I wonder how many people did a WTF!?doubletake at the end. I'm sorry I didn't get any of your messages. I was offline for a while and then deligated to dialup for longer and unable to visit y!gallery because my dad's computer was playing host to more spyware than the FBI. *snuggles*
person Hestia
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god, Neji and Ibiki!!! And no Naruto for Sasuke, eh, he's with Hinata! What an opening! And engaged? Hmm, was there some reference to that in Watching and Waiting--must go check. Oh, sorrow, I've caught up with your writing. There's so much good stuff here--the entrance to the garden, the walk into the wood, the rejection of other men, the pulling of the hair (total fetish of mine), the kiss, the new position, the desire to look--and that fabulous line about laughing at a funeral--and the loud sex and the names . . . Oh, please I hope you consider a sequel to this. Gosh, it occurs to me this was your first twosome! I guess technically there was a whole forest of gay guys listening, but really in a way, the first twosome.

Sad, hot, and sweet!
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok... I popped online today to find something to prevent my boredom from sinking in as I spent my day in solitude. I had no idea that I'd end up spending all my time today reading your works after I read Emotions by BrucesGirl that apparently fits in with yours, and I just wanted you to know I honestly don't think my day could have been anymore enjoyable. I wanted to thank you for posting your wonderful works and giving me the opportunity to read them. Thank you so very much, you saved my day.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still adore this story. It's one of my fav scenes from your universe. I love how Hinata and Neji are in cahoots.

I'd stalk you here if I could! *pulls out binoculars*
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I wasn't expecting that pairing and I was on the edge of my seat the whole wondering who it would be. I wouldn't have thought of that pairing but it works.
Thanks
person kakashizgirl
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh girl...you have done it again! Wow! Neji and Ibiki - that's a crack pairing if I've ever seen it! Did you tell me you were working on this? All I can think about is Shikamaru/Sasuke... I'm such a perv and you just really know how to keep the wheels of my dirty little mind cogging away. This concept of the woods, the darkness, the anonymity of the whole situation...very very smexy, Shik. :) I loved it! Very original! Lots and lots of love 2 U. Hey...was I to understand that there were more than one set of manlovers in the woods at the same time....now that would be a nice place to hang out at night, if this is truly the case.