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I felt like i had to read hinatas secret again. And there you first mentioned sex in the forest. ^^
I really love the idea of having anon sex in the forest with someone who is both somewhat familiar and at the same time a complete stranger.
I don't know why you thought i might hate your story. ^^ Though it's ibiki, i enjoyed reading it immensely.
Especially their "rulebreaking". Things like that can't be bad, no? XD

meOw...poor Neji...he deserves more love...

Wow...so this is like Konaha's solution to staying in the closet, but getting a nice guilt free fuck? How do these ninja's hear about this place?

Hm...It was interesting. I like the idea of the cousins getting hitched to make the old man happy, and doing their own thing to make themselves happy. It creates an automatic tension in Neji that seems rather appealing. The anonymous thing is a completely different kind of tension, though it is not at all inferior. Overall, artistic and inspired. The choice of the anonymous man Neji feels the need to return to was a very unexpected twist. Most people cannot think of him as a sexual being at all, though it's nice to see his more human side when he loses himself. So in case you didn't get it by now, I like it. ^_^

I have read the fic ''Submissive'' too, it's wonderful.
I fell in love this pairing the moment I read it and I was left to wait for somebody to write more of the pairing.
And here it is!
I seriously love this fic!
The woods and it rules and Neji and Ibiki.. xD

Great fic!

wow, this was a surprise! soooo, i guess ibiki really got into the whole thing at last. *grins* this was very different from your other stuff, in some way. not as playful, more moody, but that is neji in a nutshell. thanks, i enjoyed it.

I wondered all the way through the story who it was that was with Neji. From the story I knew he wasn't that experienced (with male/male sex), that he was big but it also seemed that he was older than Neji (so not one of the rookie 9) but I still had no idea until he gave his name. I love that it was Ibiki - it is just perfect especially after Best Laid Plans. Thanks for another wonderful story. Now that I know who was with Neji I'll reread the story with Ibiki in mind.

This is a surprising pairing. But in this context I think it would really work. Great story, but it makes me want more!

Oh Hell yes! That, my friend... was freaking awesome!! I totally loved the pairing but then again... I would - being the crack pairing whore that I am!
It had a certain Romeo/Juliet feel to it... a little angst along with the romance... yes, loved the story and I will be re-reading this bad boy later .

I would love to see a longer story with this pairing... Hell, I could be persuaded to do a story trade for another story with this pairing!

Keep up the great work!

- katsuyo

I really do love this, you know. The way you describe the darkness and the silence is just gorgeous. I love that Neji and Hinata have found some sort of peace with their situation, and that they each know what the other does and it bothers them not one bit. I think when I read this the first time, I read it as out of context with the rest of the 'verse, but now I like it even more. ^_^ Something that really got me was when Neji was walking through the woods, toward his destination, and the journey itself was even sensual. And I love, LOVE, that the darkness frees him, but he still desires even more freedom than that of anonymity. I really do have goosebumps right now, you know. LOVE THIS.