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for The Old Biddy

by ShipperTrish

schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*exhales a big puff of air* where to start? well, firstly, I absolutely adore Kakashi. I have a story of my own about him on another site, though it is incomplete. I LOVE this story. I ADORE it. I was sad to find that Kakashi and Sakura don't have their own category. So I had to troll the general categories looking for them. I love your smut. I don't know who said that your lemons were overexagerated, but they were wrong. I wrote a smut series involving the akastuki, and i basicly wrote about all my experiences, kink and all. ^.^ Anywho, as a stay at home mom, it is nice to read and write about pretend people having crazy, wild, sweaty sex, breaks up the monotony. I have almost read all of your stories. I am trying to make them last, but I can't help but devour each one. I am so greatful for my friend Jade Rose for introducing me to this site, and enabling me to indulge in my guilty pleasure, as well as introducing me to another. Yaoi. She is a fantastic writer, and even if it isn't your cup of tea, (it wasn't mine before) you sort of forget what you are reading about. In short, I hope you write a million more stories, as you are fantastic at it, and my only disagreement with your smut is, I prefer continued, er...*blushes* movement, as it makes "things" more intense. And yes. the g-spot is real. and doggy style is AWESOME. useless trivia, the g-spot is so named for the doctor who discovered it, Dr. Graffenburg. ^.^
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even though the story is over, I'd just like to say this is my favorite sotry featuring Kakashi and Sakura. In the top three of all the Naruto's I've read. Great story. I was kind of dissappointed because there was no anal and Kakashi's a pervert but thats my problem and its your story so I respect you decision fully.
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the fic. Very hot.
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an intensely sweet and satisfying tale. I really enjoyed it. The sex scenes were hot, the love became very obvious, and I thought that the plot was ingenious. It actually makes me wonder about the reaction of the other shinobi and how Kakashi and Sakura strengthened their love in the face of social pressure, but I guess I can figure that out based on the great story you already made.

Thanks so much for writing it!
person MrsCake
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A lovely ending to a great story. Loved the sequal too!
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. This is definitely one hot story.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi is so hot! I really loved this fic!! You did very well with this. I am glad you did not make it a oneshot. I love those but I like a little more to them. It was very well done!! AWESOME JOB!

Challenge: Can you think of anything to write about oh, say Gaara and Hinata? Yeah, there are some fics out there of these two, but they are always so gloomy! Just a thought....don't want to pressure your artistic mind.

GREAT JOB!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good and I enjoyed reading it.
person MrsCake
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rose must be happy as a clam! She's got loyal customers for the next fifty years and she can soak 'em for the room service! :-)
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hot. It's my guilty pleasure!

THANK YOU SO MUCH

for another amaaaaazing update!