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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oro giving a damn.
*jaw drops.
wow, how to mess with my headspace
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dunno if I missed the update or read it and forgot but dang, that second chapter was great! I love getting insights into Minato from Orochimaru's eyes. More please!!!!
person Nefertari_Alita
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i love your story, i never saw Orochimaru like this. I was never a big fan of Konoha or how dumb Naruto seemed. (Fact is, he has a brain, i just think nobody wanted to show him how to use his strengh right). So, thank you for your story and i hope to see more of it. *puppyeyes*
person CFear
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please, please continue. i want to know what happens with narutos training and how Orochimarus and Naruto's friends ship develops.
person shinningvixen
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I really hope there are more chapters of this in the future. I know your page says your working on it. I just Hope to say, Yay and good luck. I'm looking forward to more.
person Stephy
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ur story is interestin please continue as i am greatly enjoying the way the characters are interacting an the plot developments
person hsbs
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DO NOT JUNK THIS! I just finished Chapter 1 and its way too original and imaginative to casually discard. It has SO much potential..

You know for something written just to unblock writers block I am nearly wetting my pants in anticipation of reading Why Orange!!!
person dolphi99
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story, I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
person KuroiHato
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh~!! I live where this story is heading.
person dustin
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was TOTALLY worth the wait! just be sure to update more. i was waiting forever for this chapter! its a relief to know you havnt died and left me with nothing but an unfinished story as a momento of your existance.... ^*^ anyway... i look forward to your update. i have two words, PLEASE HURRY!