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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Raien
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG KEEP GOING KEEP GOING KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T I'M GOING TO DIE!!!! oro's being so sweet!!!!!!! i love it it's absolutely amazing!!!!!! and incase you didn't catch the hint....KEEP GOING!!!!!!! *fangirl scream* *passes out* XP
person pixi
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definately different, but very good. gunna be keeping an eye out for updates.
person Sandra
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i've never read a fic in which orochimaru was actually portrayed in a good light, and the fic actually made sense ^_^.

Please continue this fanfic and update soon!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...please tell me you're going to add more to this! I was SO not expecting the Minato/Orochimaru pairing but the way you did it, I can see it. Ohhh man..Konoha has certainly screwed themselves this time!!!! Fantastic job
person ophelia paine
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue this. It's a really interesting storyline and I would love to see much more.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hell i think this is great! i would love to read more!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far. please no lemons with the snake. naru/sasu please
person ShadowofLight
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! I have seen so many fics where Orochimaru tortures/rapes naruto for one cliche reason or another but this, this is more original and good! I like how the snake shows that he does have a caring side. I would love to read the rest and to find out what will happen now that naruto has the yang chakra. Please, continue this fic! :D
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue it. its a unique twist, but are you going to make oro/naru lovers? that would be alittle weird. its your story do what you want with it,i'll read it either way. keep up the good work. and update soon.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Im in love, cant wait to see where this story goes. Look forward to the next chappie... Im so intrigued how you made Oro-chan such a sweet guy ( well as sweet as an evil genius can be LOL) and the fact Naru-kun's father and Oro-chan sorta had a thing going.. oo such a nice lil twist...

Ja ne!