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for Alone Time - a Points Fic

by realnobiki

person JGoddess
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! A great balance of lemon and comedy. I like the way you kept EVERYONE OC, because, really, I can totally picture Gai acting like that. TYVM for a great read, and for giving me some good Gai action (even if it was alone :D)
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nobiki! I love this! So few people can write Guy well. You got the humor with the masculinity, tenderness, and muscle conditioning/hard work (wink wink). Ahhh... I felt like I was there- So it's YOUR fault I've got Guy on the mind right now! I loved so many things about this, I can't think of them all- Anko never admitting to her relationship, but silently comparing- Gai lasting so long due to his dedicated practice- His hurt feelings over the women's snickers... Poor Guy. Their loss, apparently! LOVE it... Thank you for posting it here.