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for Breathe

by Rosebud

schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovee! I'm crazy. I've probly tried to contact you, atleast 3 different ways.

Please email/message me soon as possible so I know your alright =/
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked this story...i think you meant for this story to be a one shot, but if you could make it into a multi chappie, that would be awesome and I would give you a 3 month supply of itanaru cookies *puppy eyes*.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, simply amazing. Without breaking character, you were able to portray Itachi a little more in depth than the actual series, it felt as if it were something I would see on the episodes. Simply beautiful.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
meeep! Loved it!
person Loki
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do not often review, but I enjoyed this very much. It was very well writen you captured the emotion and the sense very well. I could see the story clearly in my head as it played out, and the poem at the beging was lovely. Thank you for taking the time to share this, and please keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool story. Well written with a good story line. Also cute.
=)
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Itachi was still f-ing creepy the whole time, even as a model citizen. Great reflective piece.
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! okay that rocked! I loved it so much I'm not sure how to place it...just...WOW!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good
person Ordained
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I've never been much for Itachi/Naruto as a couple (or even just friends of sorts), but that just sealed the deal for me. xD There is actually possibility there!

It was lovely. X3 I look forward to the update of Lost too. -coughcough- ;D