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for It Was Bound To Happen

by MoveThemHands

schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a JiNaru before but that was superb, I loved it.
person Hmmm...
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Niceee.
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drool* one of the best jirnaru stories ive read... u would think jiriya woulda "ACCIDENTALLY" went to the wrong bathhouse before...
person Ominee
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I liketh this. Surprisingly I'm starting to get into JirNaru and this helps. My only question is, Are you gonna write more? This story has been reviewed. Bam! Stamped.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Must have more! :O
person SMUT MUSE!!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK that made me so happy! I had thought of those two a long time ago but I kinda figured you had your hands full with all kinds of others.... but that was FANTABULOUS!!! Old pervert! YAY!! I am glad you took that request and yay to person who gave it to you! WHOOT!!!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I swear if this gives me a plot dust bunny I'm gonna hunt you down and give you a noogie. I mean DAAAAAMN that was hot and good and actually had me considering circumstances that I would consider JiraNaru plausible. That's hard to do. Really you did a good job and I liked the way you had Jiraya pausing and checking how Naruto felt before they went any further. Most of the JiraNaru fics that I've been convinced to read irritate me because they portray Jiraya as a selfish bastard who doesn't give a damn about how sleeping with his student would change their relationship nor does he care about how Naruto feels so this was refreshing. Thank You.
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*reads it over and over*

This was awsome! I loved it! You did such a great job on it! I think you should become a JirNaru fan, SasuNaru is so old >D
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok all im saying here is OMG....and I'm holding you to your promise!!! XD