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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was a good lemon! Especially for a person who's new at them. :) I must say I'm getting very curious as to why Naruto can't visit Sasuke's home. And what about Naruto? Does he live in a cave or something? or does he have a real home and perhaps a family?
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I am enjoying your story ver much. :) It has a fun fairy tale feel to it. You should double che3ck your work for typos--there were a few places you mixed up things like "they're/their" but overall it was pretty good.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All of Mercedes Lackey's music is available through Firebird Arts and Music at www.firebirdarts.com. Snow Magic is on the Freedom, Flight & Fantasy CD and they also have it available as an MP3.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You can look under Lamas Night. I dimmly remember seeing a copy of the song in there. And the song itself was in a duet with Leslie. I have the copy in some old filk i have from a con.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I loved this story because it was soo cliche and simply. It reminded me of a fairy tale. I'm sure there are some people that are trying to bash this fic; but, don't listen to them. Everyone has their style of writing and this so happen to be yours. Maya Angelou's works were often harshly critized when she first started writing and look at her now. So, good job! Learn from this fic and just keep improving.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh im loving this! especially the song referances~ quite compelling
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This took a while but it really grew on me a lot. I'm loving the folklore style of it and the song ficish parts at the bottom. The latest chapter is the best one you've written. It convened emotion best. The imagery in it was sweet too. I can imagine Naruto kicking ass and how heart broken they both are now. Much love to every word~
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaa! That was so sad. I love this story! *bursts into tears again* Waaaaa! I hope it has a happy ending. Please update soon!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww :(
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now im sad. Man poor sasuke can't ever be happy not to mention poor naruto. Oh well can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon. :P