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for Forest Magic

by Nanaka

person Soulkitsune
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and post the next chapter as soon as you can!!!!!! Pwease? I will give you a cookie! =(-.-)=O (<---teh O is teh cookie....) I love this story so far ad can't wait to see what happens next! Though it and the poem sound awfully familiar.... Anywho... **gives you puppy eyes** please? And would you pleas email me when you do update it? my email is Soulketcher202@hotmail.com thanks!!!!!
person moo
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! but is itachi truly dead? lol a pair of dark eyes watching... anyways this is so cute and the lemon was good. hope you update soon. oh wait what about that kakairu?
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow for being new to lemons, you write like as if you have written them lots of times. It was really good.

I am really impressed. I am not a writer, so anytime I read something so well written I really appreciate it and I just have to say how much I enjoy it.

I love the fluff of this story and that there isn't angst in this. Or I should say, I hope there won't be any angst in this story. It is so very good just being a fluffy romantic story. You don't really find many of them and when there is one, you just want it to stay that way. I know there has to have moments where there is drama in the story, but hopefully not to much.

I look forward to your next update.
person kati
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very cliched and the writing style is limp and without flare. there is no real emotion being communicated. however i am curious as to what will happen next, do you have ny juicy plot twists for us? i guess that the 'dark eyes' belong to a pissed kyuubi, yes? nd naruto is a spirit of the forest?
person animelover
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this was so sweet! did u say this was your first story? not 2 shabby if it is ... kinda like a fairy tale. keep it up! oh, and thanks for not making folks log in to revu. i like to read but i'm a lowly lurker. LOL!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool story.
=)
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good.

I hope that Sakura and the rest of the girls can take a hint that Sasuke isn't interested in them and will go away lol. I'm glad that it seems to focus on more in Sasuke's study and forest then around those annoying pests of girls that can't seem to get it through their heads that some guys just are not interested in them.

Is Naruto going to end up related to Kyuubi or is he Kyuubi? Hmm, I guess I will have to wait and see for the answers to those questions.

I really like this story. I looking forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad those two have made up. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person akume
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maa, this was an interesting piece. Quite original too. Anyway, please update again soon. Ja ne.
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh this is sounding cute!! update again soon!!