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for Orange Crush

by KitsuneFun

person Keitaros_kero_neko
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love the plot, it's so cute!! I was gunna be an annoying fangirl and beg shamelessly for another chapter, but then I went to see if you were writing any other stories. I'm insanely impressed at how many cute stories you have. I'm in the process of writing a SasuNaru fanfic right now, and even though I started a couple months ago, I'm still in the background info gathering stage and just have a couple really rough drafts written. I'm amazed by people like you that can write so many stories with each one being so unique. Keep up the incredible work! =^-^=
person Karen
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLease update soon! I really want to know what happens next! I've been waiting a long time. please please please~~~~~ I realize you might be busy with other things but I really realllyyyyyy~~~~~~~~~~~ want to know what happens next.
person Nami
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's power is to be a sexy bas*ard :D. That's what I think. Or initiating touch or kissing people gives him the ability to see the potential future. ....and being a sexy bas*ard XD. But, poor Sasuke. Getting beaten up and teased and taunted, and now he's about to be sexed up by Sai (why is that bad again?).
person Theaos
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First chapter was all right. Though, it was annoying reading "hon" all the time.
person Krystal
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I hope you continue soon.
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my!! SOMEONE SAVE SASUKE FROM SAI!!! and SOMEONE TURN ON THE LIGHTS!!! please update soon!!!
ASOTA
person lonelylulaby
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Does Sasuke have precognitive(sp?) powers, related to sexual acts? Or will he not be getting any power? I really like how Naruto is keeping the piece between the student body and Sasuke. I wonder what Itachi is going to do to Sasuke once all is said and done.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so well written and the plot is intriging... you could take it anywhere. Somehow I had missed chapter 2 so today I got to read 2 chatpers which is always fun.
And how you ended! Poor Sasuke... (so, are these 'flashes' intuition or is he starting to develop some powers I wonder...) I hope Naruto gets to him in time.
person Amy
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story so far! ^_^ It is very origanl. Oooooo Sasuke has visons...naughty ones that that ^_^ I can't wait to read more. I hope to update soon I will be check often!!!!
person trabeck
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!