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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really great chapter!!! I am looking forward to the next installment!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. More please! I love your world, and I have to admit, I don't think this is too far away Sasuke's normal personality, or at least what he's like under all the pride.
Slave
More soon please
Slave
More soon please
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extremely interesting story. I've never read anything like it. With Sasuke being hated for once. I can't wait to see more.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...i think Sasuke does have powers. He gets visions...can see into the future whenever he gets close or touches Naruto. Or is this just happening with him and Naruto and not having visions about anything else. Hmmm interesting....very interesting. Where in the world can i get a creative imagination like yours? lol i was just not blessed with a very good one. I like this...ALOT. I hope you keep going with it. Poor Sasuke...it's almost like you switched their places a bit....usually it's Naruto thats hated by all. Kiss him Narutoooooo *grins*
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy I feel so bad for Sasuke. People can be so cruel for the stupidist reasons.
Naruto is so good to him. While reading this all I could think about was their roles (Naruto and Sasuke) have been reversed from the manga and anime. With Naruto being the popular one and everyone wanting to be with him while despising Sasuke and treating really bad.
So Itachi fell for Naruto when he met him the first time, I wonder what he will do once Sasuke comes home because he was with Naruto. I hope nothing bad will happen to him.
Also I find it odd that Sasuke keeps getting erotic visions about him and Naruto but it doesn't seem that Naruto is having that same reaction. I wondering is this only when it is skin to skin contact or is it with any touch from Naruto?
I am more and more intrigued by this story and I am looking forward to your next update.
Naruto is so good to him. While reading this all I could think about was their roles (Naruto and Sasuke) have been reversed from the manga and anime. With Naruto being the popular one and everyone wanting to be with him while despising Sasuke and treating really bad.
So Itachi fell for Naruto when he met him the first time, I wonder what he will do once Sasuke comes home because he was with Naruto. I hope nothing bad will happen to him.
Also I find it odd that Sasuke keeps getting erotic visions about him and Naruto but it doesn't seem that Naruto is having that same reaction. I wondering is this only when it is skin to skin contact or is it with any touch from Naruto?
I am more and more intrigued by this story and I am looking forward to your next update.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story, I really really appreciated the update. Poor Poor Sasuke. Those idiots at school probably still don't get that if they do something to Sasuke, Naruto will come to his rescue. There was only one problem I could see. In the first and second chapter when naruto went fast you used terms like minutes. If he was that fast he would move in seconds or moments or something like that. Minutes would take too long. Other than that awesome job! Can't wait until the next chapter:D
THANK YOU!!
THANK YOU!!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool. One of the best I've read in a long time :3
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I fell in love with this story! You always do this to me, write something amazing even though you're probably too busy to give steady updates. It makes me want to cry. Anyways, I thought the beginning was hot, this is a very interesting take on the sasuke/ naruto dynamic and i love it. I loved the movie sky high it would be interesting to see how you can take that same kind of idea and make it yours. You're doing great so far, please update as soon as you can. I'm begging you:D
Thank You very much!
Thank You very much!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I hope you continue this story!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg is that sasuke's power man why are they so mean to him just cause he's different thats horrible i feel bad for him people used to pick on me because i was well "different" until i made the rugby team cause well all that pent up rage umm well when you find an outlet you let it all out people stopped messing with me cause well haha i could mess them up so yeah anyway i love the story and i can't wait for the next chapter