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March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That actually turned out touchingly sweet, innocent and tender. It was beautiful.
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, and yeah I'm pretty sure Juugo's eyes aren't gray but aside from that I really really enjoyed reading this, so many good things you mentioned. That Juugo's innocence and the size differences how it all made Sasuke more excited. How they stopped pretending after awhile. The whole set up of the sotry was real I liked it all and the characters were in character.
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October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had never even thought about this pair before I saw this fic. But now...maybe I want more. >.> It was so achingly sweet, and I love that you gave Sasuke a heart at this point in the plotline. He always portrayed himself as so cold and uncaring. It's nice to see him actually be nice, even if he never meant for it to get that far. Excellently written! Well done!
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have never heard of this pairing before, but I found it very cute, and sweet... in an ackward way, but still wonderful!
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i adore this.It's just the hottest sweetest thing.I wish there where more.....
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as you read.)
Nice beginning. . . . Flows smoothly. I like the way Sasuke and Juugo act and react
Nice description of actions and scene. . . . I wonder why things are getting harder with Juugo. . . . (*snicker*) “And now Suigetsu was staring, too.” XD . . . . Nice portrayal of Suigetsu. =D . . . . I didn’t see that one coming. ô.o . . . . Yup, “there it was.” =) . . . . (*snicker*) That surprised me too, Suigetsu. ^^;
I like the short scenes in this fic. . . . Ahaha, “He had to quickly halt his train of thought.” Like, “Where did that come from?” XD . . . . Uh-oh, “nasty gleam in his eye.” Great description of it.
This whole, er, “problem” for the story is kinda cute. And Sasuke’s so mildly calm when he’s with the Team Hebi members in the manga. I love it; I can totally see this. =) . . . . So does this mean Sasuke’s not a virgin? Who’d he do it with? õ_ô . . . . What is Suigetsu playing at? Õ_õ . . . . Wow. Is Juugo agitated because of his crush, and the fighting is what’s setting him off so easily? . . . . I guess the fall jarred him. . . . (*after reading Suigetsu’s line*) Dumbass. ¬_¬ . . . . Must be tiring for Sasuke, trying to be everyone’s mother in this. ^^ . . . . Oh, that’s cool, Sasuke knows some general healing. ô_ô . . . . I guess that kind of healing would hurt somewhat. . . . Aww. “Unsure why he felt the need to do so.” Cuz Juugo’s cuuuuuute. ♥ . . . . This story is kind of sweet, actually. . . . (*shiver*) I get the feeling that Karin comes off as creepy when she tries to be cute.
. . . Don’t have much to say yet, except that the scene with these two just sitting there is kind of neat. . . . (?) Interesting, Sasuke’s italicized thought. . . . “I’ll figure something else out.” Heh. That’s easy for him to say. . . . I like the repeated, “This felt good”s; I can visualize Sasuke slowly relaxing. . . . Is . . . is Sasuke thinking about Naruto? (God, I hope so.) . . . . “Exposed collarbones,” (!!) (I’ve got a collarbone fetish. >_>) . . . . Er, might want to put a little more thought into your positioning, Sasuke. (*sweat*blush*) . . . . Heheh, this is why there should be more Juugo/Sasuke out there. ♥ . . . . Love Sasuke’s sudden passion. The whole scene just went slo~w~ly and sen~su~al~ly ♥, and then all of a sudden, flash! Sasuke’s kissing him back passionately. Love it. ♥ . . . . LOVE these paragraphs: “Sasuke kept his eyes open [. . .] had never done this before, either.” I really like how he’s wondering about whether this is “normal.” And . . . oh, I just think they’re excellent paragraphs. =D . . . . Careful, Sasuke, Juugo’s head might still be tender. . . . Verrrry nice description. That’s what I call “erotic.” (None of that crap I find in the bookstores.) . . . . Awesome progression. . . . “Anticipation” is right. I like how this kind of drags out. The longer the better, I think. . . . Wait, this sentence caught my attention: “Sasuke was pretending he was someone else, too [. . .] before he was truly ready.” Does . . . does that mean . . . what does that mean? I’m confused. I seriously love the line, but I’m not sure what it’s hinting at. õ_õ . . . . M-man, this is . . . (*blush*) . . . . (!) He said “Sasuke.” Does this mean he quit pretending? . . . . Oh jeez, the fantasies! Õ.Õ . . . . (*giggle*) “Better?” Uh, yeah. ^^;;;
O.O “Every . . . single . . . time?” T-th-that ending . . . startling for some reason!
Gray eyes . . . those’re pretty.
This is going on my list, of course! ^_^
Nice beginning. . . . Flows smoothly. I like the way Sasuke and Juugo act and react
Nice description of actions and scene. . . . I wonder why things are getting harder with Juugo. . . . (*snicker*) “And now Suigetsu was staring, too.” XD . . . . Nice portrayal of Suigetsu. =D . . . . I didn’t see that one coming. ô.o . . . . Yup, “there it was.” =) . . . . (*snicker*) That surprised me too, Suigetsu. ^^;
I like the short scenes in this fic. . . . Ahaha, “He had to quickly halt his train of thought.” Like, “Where did that come from?” XD . . . . Uh-oh, “nasty gleam in his eye.” Great description of it.
This whole, er, “problem” for the story is kinda cute. And Sasuke’s so mildly calm when he’s with the Team Hebi members in the manga. I love it; I can totally see this. =) . . . . So does this mean Sasuke’s not a virgin? Who’d he do it with? õ_ô . . . . What is Suigetsu playing at? Õ_õ . . . . Wow. Is Juugo agitated because of his crush, and the fighting is what’s setting him off so easily? . . . . I guess the fall jarred him. . . . (*after reading Suigetsu’s line*) Dumbass. ¬_¬ . . . . Must be tiring for Sasuke, trying to be everyone’s mother in this. ^^ . . . . Oh, that’s cool, Sasuke knows some general healing. ô_ô . . . . I guess that kind of healing would hurt somewhat. . . . Aww. “Unsure why he felt the need to do so.” Cuz Juugo’s cuuuuuute. ♥ . . . . This story is kind of sweet, actually. . . . (*shiver*) I get the feeling that Karin comes off as creepy when she tries to be cute.
. . . Don’t have much to say yet, except that the scene with these two just sitting there is kind of neat. . . . (?) Interesting, Sasuke’s italicized thought. . . . “I’ll figure something else out.” Heh. That’s easy for him to say. . . . I like the repeated, “This felt good”s; I can visualize Sasuke slowly relaxing. . . . Is . . . is Sasuke thinking about Naruto? (God, I hope so.) . . . . “Exposed collarbones,” (!!) (I’ve got a collarbone fetish. >_>) . . . . Er, might want to put a little more thought into your positioning, Sasuke. (*sweat*blush*) . . . . Heheh, this is why there should be more Juugo/Sasuke out there. ♥ . . . . Love Sasuke’s sudden passion. The whole scene just went slo~w~ly and sen~su~al~ly ♥, and then all of a sudden, flash! Sasuke’s kissing him back passionately. Love it. ♥ . . . . LOVE these paragraphs: “Sasuke kept his eyes open [. . .] had never done this before, either.” I really like how he’s wondering about whether this is “normal.” And . . . oh, I just think they’re excellent paragraphs. =D . . . . Careful, Sasuke, Juugo’s head might still be tender. . . . Verrrry nice description. That’s what I call “erotic.” (None of that crap I find in the bookstores.) . . . . Awesome progression. . . . “Anticipation” is right. I like how this kind of drags out. The longer the better, I think. . . . Wait, this sentence caught my attention: “Sasuke was pretending he was someone else, too [. . .] before he was truly ready.” Does . . . does that mean . . . what does that mean? I’m confused. I seriously love the line, but I’m not sure what it’s hinting at. õ_õ . . . . M-man, this is . . . (*blush*) . . . . (!) He said “Sasuke.” Does this mean he quit pretending? . . . . Oh jeez, the fantasies! Õ.Õ . . . . (*giggle*) “Better?” Uh, yeah. ^^;;;
O.O “Every . . . single . . . time?” T-th-that ending . . . startling for some reason!
Gray eyes . . . those’re pretty.
This is going on my list, of course! ^_^
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very clever, very hot.Gee who is Sasuke thinking of, but I'm glad they saw each other, heck,,,,why not go all the way?A bit of a tease.Slick, unusual. I like muchly.
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic was very nice and very well written. Is this just a one shot, or will there be more? It is the first fic I have read with this couple, but it is one that I was thinking about doing myself. Keep up the good work.
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'It worked every single time'
O-o gyaaaaahhh! squeeeeeee!
That was OMG great! A bit of Sasuke angst mixed in but enough fluff to quell the bitterness. Nice.
O-o gyaaaaahhh! squeeeeeee!
That was OMG great! A bit of Sasuke angst mixed in but enough fluff to quell the bitterness. Nice.
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, this fic is soo hott. I just read it again, for the second time, and noticing such a small number of reviews for such a wonderfully written story, thought I should do something about that. Thanks so much for the story!