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Hey its 2014 and this story is great so please continue I hope u do

No Indeed the first chapter did not suck. It was perfectly laid out for us. I like the time skips with future and past or rather maybe present and past. Very interesting on how the two will possibly reconcile this or not.

LMAO!! I cried when I read Zippa-dee-doo-da part. I love that you have Orochimaro as a good person in this I get tired of reading him as a bad guy.8D Glad to read that Kankuro is on the police force. This is such a great story!!!!

This is a good story, and I want to see where the situation between Gaara and Naruto goes. So I'm begging you to please update this story!!!!!!!!

Go, Naruto! Hit him with another lamp!!! Oh, sorry. lol Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

hello there!!!! wow i must admit im shocked....i never thought it was possible to fall in loh a story....hehe but know i know it is because im definetly in love with this one....i almost cried when i saw this was the last update....i really love the story, the plot, the reality of it all, everything!!! this is the best story i have ever read, seriously!! i cant wait for the next chap!!! oh and btw you are the best writer ever!!!!

oh thank you I love this story. you are doing a great job. finally he left Sasuke(dickhead). Thanks so much for sharing.

Oh please let Gaara kill that bastard for hurting Naruto and the kids!

*growls* I really don't like Sasuke, and question, would Naruto's parents really blame him (I personally would hopenot) or is he just beating himself up? *sighs*

Great update and I look forward to the next. Ja Ne.

Well i guess the snake was trying to start some stuff between the two of them after all. But that still doesn't give Sasuke the right to hurt people and espeially his own kids, where I come from thats all it would take to get you killed (at least in my house). Since a child was involved, were the police notified? I hope so cause that would look bad for Sasuke in custody arrangements.

Another great chapter, and Merry Christmas to ya!

hey, hey... i really have a friggin' feeling that Sasuke's doing some pot session when Naruto's away, i can just feel it in my guts... ya 'know that happens all the time, especially here in the Philippines it's quite common, sexual abuse within the family and incest. i don't want to see those kids getting sexually abused! no! no! no! but then, you are the author so please feel free to violate them inside your twisted wicked and perverted mind anyway you like. (pot calling the kettle black) husband loses work, wife fends for the family, family money getting spent by the husband through drugs, women and casino dealing. lovely wife gets battered... it keeops repeatin' and repeatin every time i hear about that stuff it makes me want to hate the guy for being the complete useless ass that he is and the wife for not being able to stand up and face the fact that her husband IS useless, beats her up etc. but i think in this story, something about what Sasuke was doing while Naruto's away will be the last straw when Naruto finds out finally about it. of course there will be some denial, but Gaara's there to help him realize that! and then the kids will have to stay with the old gramps... anyway they're just my thoughts! it's all up to you! he he he!