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for Family Portrait

by Kagenoshi

schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaaah!!! update soon!!! i looooove this, and yeah, if you see someone beat up or you yourself are gettin a shitload of fists and verbal abuse from someone you should DRAW THE LINE!!!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. It is really well written, and is a good break from all of the PWP's that flood this site. This fic has what is important to a GOOD story....a PLOT!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks that the Uchiha bastard is cheating on Naru-Chan. T.T (For the record... I hate Sasugay (yes I misspelled it on purpose) as well.) Wonderful story so far. I like how you are showing the REAL side of abuse. (Never been through it myself, but several of my friends have...) PLEASE keep up the good work and update soon. I really do love this story. Ja Ne.
person shai69
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is brutal but very realistic. I am beginning to enjoy this fic very much, I can't wait to red more.
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No matter how hard I try to get out, your plot keeps dragging me back in....(you know what movie that's from) but this has got to be the most suspense filled story to date. The damn Sasuke is having an affair or raping his kids I just know it!! Damn SOB!!!!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG Thanks you so much for this chapter it was great. I love this story. You have done a fantastic job. Please Please PLEASE update soon.
Happy Birthday and done worry 30 is not that bad I turned 30 in May.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fuck! first chapter and i'm already crying!!! fuck i can actually fucking relate, fuck! Good first chapter fuck! uhuhuhu... fuck....
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww.... please update soon!? i love it when Sasuke's a bastard, it just feels so right!!! you do know i like to make him suffer ne? anyway hope for a next great update!!!
person Stacy
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am sorry to hear about you beta. i hope she gets well soon. your story is truely awesome. the chapter before your AN i was so excited when i saw that there was another i jumped for joy. when it turned out to be an AN i wanted to cry!!!! but good things come for those who wait!! *sniff* so i will just have to wait *sniff* maybe you can send your beta some motrin(sp) to help with her pain!! the quicker the beta gets better, the quicker us loyal fans can stop crying for a new chapter!!.........i hope i did not sound rude or mean........i just really love your story!!
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear of the injury. This is a wonderful story, but I'm an understanding person. Both of you should wait until ya'll feel better to continue.