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for Family Portrait

by Kagenoshi

schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to hear of your loss and of your beat's injury. I how both of you feel better soon. I also am sorry to find out you really had to live through the situations in your story. No one has the right to beat their spouse in any case. I will say that I am drawn to this story and I hope to read more of it soon.

Be Well
person Yuikey
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first Chapter!!!
person akume
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you ask me I think the liar is Sasuke. Though I could be wrong. Anyway, thanks for the update. It was awesome. Until next time. Ja.
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is good. Wow. your are so good. I am totally hooked WOW. I don't have the words for how great this is and how surprised I am to find this gem from it's start. Thank you sooo much for sharing this way to cool story.
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I like it. Don't worry about people who might fret over not having a Naru/Sasu pairing. Honestly, it has its moments but there's times when Sasuke just seems so polar opposite of Naruto that I can't see it happening. I enjoy Naruto/Gaara and even Naru/Shika or Shino. Although, I'm kinda twitchy about the idea of Gaara in this. Dealing? Something will have to give cause if Naruto left Sasuke and tried to take his kids, Sasuke could take the three back on the grounds of Gaara being unfit. Can't wait to see what more you'll have!
person inumoon3
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
POOR NARU-CHAN!!! Can't wait til the update...I hope Gaara helps him soon!!!!!
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story so far, was waiting for the next chapter. I love non-SasuNaru stories, especially mpregs. There aren't too many of those around unfortunately. And don't worry, I don't like Sasuke's character either. Making him an ass holds true to canon:D

I can't wait until your next chapter, I hope it's up soon. Very, very soon *hint, hint* I want to see how long it takes for Gaara to figure out what's going on. Or Shikamaru. A genius like him should get it pretty quickly, at least, that is, if he's around to see the evidence. I can't wait to get rid of Sasuke. The sooner he's gone the better, for everyone involved. And as for who the liar is, I'd say Sasuke with only an infinitesimal amount of doubt in my mind. With the way he's been treating Naruto, I wouldn't doubt that he's been lying to him about all kinds of things.
person Xiathan
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! this stroy is really good! it's hard to see gaara and naruto getting to together in it, but can't wait! and i think it's sasuke that's lying.
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i totaly love this fic so far. i caint wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! please update sooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person llyoung
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. You write domestic violence the way it really is. (and personally I think Sasuke is the liar instead of Orochimaru).