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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's kind of sad first chapter, really Sasuke is a big teme in here...but anyway, I know as the chapter progress, the relationship of Sasuke & Naruto would go smoothly..anyway, during the quarrel of Sasuke & Naruto why is there so many "fucking" words in between the sentences, especially that their eldest son hear their conversation, that is really bad to hear especially for children...I think there eldest son, is old enough to understand the situation..so author please continue with the chapter 2!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is good. This is better that watching a soap opera. Update soon ok!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad. Please update soon
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a truelly good writing style, and I really like where this is going. It's very sad, so please hang in there, Naru-chan~<3
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so fare, I have yet to find a fic like this one. It is very different, and I like it. But I can't seem to fathom were your going with this, so I am waiting on pins and neddles for the next chap. Good Work!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg thoes poor kids poor naruto man if i had been naruto i would have told the kids to pack their things and then we would have left been gone before the bastard got back. i hate sasuke such a.....bastard faced duck butt head.
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww..sad...poor Naruto and kids..Sasuke is such an asshole! Please update soon!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was debating with my self on if I wanted to read this story or not, and I finally decided to....I'm glad I did. It very well written, and I can't wait to read more.
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Poor Naru-chan...Sasuke better straighten up or he's going to lose Naru-chan...I love this couple...but with Sasuke treating Naru-chan like that...I don't know...WELL UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Truly an emotional piece. I hope you add another chapter soon. Until then.