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for Exploding Stars

by Akaya

person Rymika
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good ^_^ Can't wait for the neaxt chapter! Hope you update soon! Keep up the good work!
person Anaheyla
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

I hate cliffhangers!

Please continue! Must know what happens!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute. In Chapter 2, I liked the whole bit about Sasuke's phone number, and the note about how Kakashi would rather die at least knowing what happened in his book. And in Chapter 3, I liked the line about how the sane are far more lethal than the insane, and the line about trying to avoid becoming a pervert when you've bathed with Jiraiya and Kakashi. I'm really wondering what happened the night before, though.
A NOTE TO THE CHARACTERS INVOLVED: Good luck, Sasuke, you'll get over it (I hope) and maybe you'll score too. Naruto, please don't make it too hard for him. And girls . . . back up a little. Sakura, be nice. Itachi, what are you up to?
NOTE TO THE AUTHOR: Thanks and keep updating! ^_^
person Raina
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story.
I can't wait to see what's in store for the newlyweds.
The Kakashi and Iruka part had me cracking up.
I wonder how Itachi and Kisame fit in.
I can't wait until the next chapter! *commits title to memory*
-Rai
person LadyWolf
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please.......soon!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like reading this!!!
person Rymika
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your story update soon ^_^
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg I really like this story a lot!! I can't believe they don't remember what happened! Okay, maybe I can believe it, but I don't want to since it should be in my mind (love the boys together)! Ahhhh, update soon please??
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god XDDDDD This is wonderful! You're an excellent writer!

Goodness, that was just wonderful how the two woke up *giggles* I love your use of details and the emotions put in this story

*chuckles* Poor poor Naruto and Sasuke XD This story is great and I have a feeling it will only get much much better so don't leave us hanging for too long!
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How could you just end right there? I demand, no wait, beg for you to do another chapter.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. this sounds very promising! i look foward to your next update!! i cant wait to see naru's reaction!