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for Falling Leaves

by Ordained

schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sad but still beautiful story.

I really just want to cry for Sasuke because no one had ever shown him any kindness, granted he didn't show anyone kindness either but then again we get that from our upbringing and since his family really didn't show him love (as stated in chapter 1) it is no wonder he grew up cold and lonely.

I wonder if Sasuke is becoming as addicted to Naruto as Naruto is to Sasuke. I think he is even though he trys to deny it and push it away until Naruto comes that is. He so desperately wants and needs him. Yeah for Naruto and Sasuke. A little bit of happiness (or maybe a lot now that Naruto is there) is so good to read. I hope that happiness will overshadow his bitterness of life before Naruto even he will start to embrace what life he has left with happiness and peace.

This is so good. I can't wait for your next update (no matter how long it may take).
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If it had gone on even one more line the tears in my eyes would have fallen. Beautifully written... terribly heartwrenching.
person susanna
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had already deleted it from my bookmark list because I thought you had abandoned the story. I am glad that you continued it.

It is really sad - won't there be a cure? Though as you write it, everything else but a sad ending would be cheesy.
person gaara89
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jeez this is so beautiful. I love the way you've constructed the plot. It's great and I hope to see more soon.
person gaara89
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. I want more. Please update soon. It promises to be a wonderful story. I'll buy my tissues while i'm waiting.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniff sniff* You bring me to tears my dear...
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwweee! I love this story, it's so cute and sweet. I can't wait for more.
=)
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story, very lyrical
person oohshiny
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww, and OMG SWEET you HAVE to email me when you update this. my email is deannathx@comcast.net
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww - that chapter made me so sad. Poor Sasuke, and poor Naruto, it's difficult caring for someone who is willing to fade away. Can't wait for your next update