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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful story. ^^ I really like it. Hope you'll keep updating.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to like this! I'm going to go back and read it from the beginning (I always start with the most recent chapter). Keep up the good work!
One thing to help: the correct word is 'dying', not 'dieing'. Very common mistake, just thought I would point it out in case you want to fix it. :)
One thing to help: the correct word is 'dying', not 'dieing'. Very common mistake, just thought I would point it out in case you want to fix it. :)
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is sad yet, beautiful! Please continue!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwe!!! Thar was so cute! I'd loved it.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Normally I don't like death fics, but I like this one, and I hope that there will be some last minute rescue for Sasuke.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo touching. I am very moved by Naruto's caring nature and not wanting Sauake to feel alone while awaiting death. Bravo!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reading this story makes my soul hurt... and that's a very, very good thing. I don't know how else to tell you that your writing is amazing but that.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your disclaimer from chapter one is to funny:) I have enjoyed the first three chapters! I'm looking forward to see how the "sun" will bring some joy to Sasuke.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like it. You've got me hooked and I want more. I love how you've written this, and it all seems so right.... Can't wait to see more.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That boy is just what Sauske needs to stop feeling sorry for himself. Good job so far.