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Okay... not a fan of suicide but it's done well... hahaha... suicide by freezer. That's so lame. If I was Sasuke I'd do some fire jutsu befitting of Uchiha. The freezer thing doesn't have enough flare. You need to make it flame... flame like the uke he really is... hehehe...

:: wipes tears ::

That was chilling. I could just be overly sensitive to feeling worthless because of letting a loved one down, but the whole thing feels very believable to me, and it's paced wonderfully as well.
Then again, I'm not a Naruto fan so not being too familiar with the characters could have made it feel more believable >>

This was quite interesting...I kept finding myself thinking that Naruto was going to come back and look for Sasuke. I also kept wondering how in the world could he freeze himself to death...lol.

I liked it even though it is a bit disturbing.

that's crazy..... but original. thanks for sharing!

Sad... though maybe a sequel... with Naruto finding him?
It was good, but I feel sad now. Darn you!

Yeah, that was dark. And the very opposite of Sauske he wouldn't give up on the blonde that fast. But it was still a good short story.

OMG! That was freaking great! "Ice prince" I get it! XD
Ok but seriously in the story Sasuke has got to be the most idiotic person ever. He doesn't want to put the Naru through pain and yet he is going to kill himself which again makes him selfish! Oh God I just wanted to reach into the story and slap him!!!! *wishes that was possible*
Anyways, I love your writing and the flow of it. The style makes me very happy! YAY!!! *is blushing* ok I go now,
K
Thanks!

Well, you criticized yourself enough, didn't you? So, given that you know how Sasuke really is...you are the author, so you are God (in this fic at least), it is a fanfiction so OOCness is allowed...well, this is a fitting end for the younger Uchiha. I can't help but agree. And I happen to love your description, so compliments!