rate_review Reviews

Love the story. You bring out the atmosphere of suspense very well. I'm just a bit curious, is there a way to follow a story on AFF? I just started using the site, soo...
Anyway, looking forward to the next update!

I'm really diggin' this, and am would like to read more, if you have motivation left that is.

I FEEL BAD FOR SASUKE BUT THEN AGAIN HE ASKED FOR IT,SO I DONT KNOW WHAT TO THINK.WONDER WHAT HAPPENS NEXT HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON

Wow
I must applaud you
and then applaud you some more
Normally, sex scenes are dull to read because of things like points of view and lack of writing skills
so far the fics Ive enjoyed the most were those when there really was no sex explicity written but those who let your mind imagine everything. You, however, somehow mixed the "not write anything at all but there is aftermath and you know what happened so use your dirty mind and decide your own details" and "lets write everything in detail and not let the reader think for himself" into something most lovely and rather unexplainable
perfect, I cant even imagine how it could've been done any better. The overal fiction was waaay too short (you cant leave us there! D:) but the cuts were right. Super right. Perfect length.
Perfect mood and everything too
Best sex scene Ive ever read (and mind you, Ive read a lot!) and I applaud you for it. Its an A+

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Interesting. Slightly incoherent (Is Kimmi dead or alive?) but I suppose that everything will make more sense as you progress. Good so far.

Appropriately named! Can't wait for the next chapter.

INTERESTING...WHATS THIS ABOUT KYUUBI?HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON

I like it. I like how you write, very film noir XD. I'm very interested to see where this goes and hope you continue. Oh and Welcome to the Fandom XD.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!