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for The Guardian

by Midnightstorm

person ZenithB
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No doubt I felt the scene and if these vampires that call themselves my students hadn't sucked me dry of energy I would probably be bawling and snotty.But no worries I think everyone understands people have outside lives but if possible just don't abandon it if you can.HAPPY HOLIDAYS I got a bottle of champagne a beer AND NO WORK TOMORROW!!! WOOHOO!!!!
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Im new to this story and I think Im in love! ^^ Its refreshing to find a new spin on the old SasuNaru pairing and you give it justice. The only problem I have are the grammer and spelling errors, but I think I can over look those because this story is just that awesome!!! ^^ I do hope to see more soon. And you have a new fangirl. Until next time!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. This was one of the first stories i read on AFF when I first joined and i absolutely fell in love with it. I despaired of it every being finished. I love this story and look forward to more updates.
person Ikippiki
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWW why a cliffie here?! Your story is really good please don't stop here!
person nyan3
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Purr...
Someone here wants more. As fast as possible.
8) (Make Sasgay jump him 'k? *mwahahaha* lotsas of lemon!)
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your fanfic. The way Naruto is towards Sauska, is really sweet.:)
person beekayz
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Lord. I love this so much! I prostrate myself at your feet! I personally looove the developments of this chapter! You were able to get the emotion through so well! *pats on back* Thanks so much for updating so quick! *worships* Ohh, I can't wait to see how their date goes ahh! My cuteness sense are tingling. XD <3<3<3
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh!!! Hahaha, I like how it ended and now I can't wait to see what's going to happen on their date. I can understand where Naruto is coming from. I mean he knew that he lusted after Sasuke with the numerous kisses he allowed, but he doesn't really know what the feeling of love is about. Hopefully Sasuke can help him figure it out!! Oh, question...is there going to be any possessiveness in this story with either Naruto or Sasuke? And I just wanted to tell you I LOVE YOUR STORY! Take your time, enjoy what you do, and keep up the excellent work!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww I loved this chapter. :) I'm glad Naruto isn't just going all out for it! Wonderful way to go.

Thanks for the update ^_^