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for The Guardian

by Midnightstorm

schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, love it.
I am in love with this story and honestly, I really liked that it was awkward between the two, usually it's like that in real life, so it was well thought out on your part as the writer. Anyways, I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter now, the newest chapter was really good and left me hanging, lol.
Keep up the good work!
I look forward to the future chapters!
Ja ne!
Fujinakaheero
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bravo
person LadyWolf
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I get it...it can get old whe he always declares that he loves the Teme...but I do like the way it ended. Hey not every story has to end with a lemon or two or three or....sorry ;o)!!!

But hey can't wait to read the next chapter, hmmm...i wonder how the date will go?
person Word_Slave
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! This was great!! I loved this chapter. I just couldn't decide if Sasuke suddenly fainted from blood loss at his fantasies of from shock!!! Update when you can. But I can't wait!!! We're all just dying to know what happens next! Thanks.
Slave
person despairs
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok i'm rewriting my review lol. I was unhappy with my first one so... anyways kudos to Sasuke for doing everything in his power to get stubborn, muleheaded Naruto to open his eyes and see him as somebody he could love and have a relationship with...no better way than a little jealousy eh. Well it worked lol...i even got a little (ok more than a little) jealous on Naruto's behalf....darn baka. I just really can't stand Karin.

Anyways...take your time updating :D Dont worry 'bout ya fans, we will all still be here waiting for you.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmm smexy!! Wow, you did exactly what I would have done! The story line is excellent and I love it still! I think it was time to add a bit of jealousy into Naruto's life and you started off perfectly! How much longer until they start to really get together?? I can be patient but I am also very curious! Today is my birthday too so I'm glad that some of my favorite stories are being updated! It makes me feel so much better! Also, if you need to take more time off, then that's always a good thing in the long run because it is your life and you know what is best for you. I will still be a fan of your writings and will look forward to when you do update. Just please don't abandon the story and keep it running with all the great ideas you have...and thank you for the enjoyable chapters you have written so far!
person blueh
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story... It's just so great! Love how you made Sasuke work his body. Now that Naruto's jealous, I wonder what'll happen next. ^^ Keep writing! And here are some cookies!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You make the whole chapter het and even end it that way and then say it'll be a while for an update, if there will be one at all?

Ugh.
person beekayz
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I'm sad to hear things are getting too busy! You have my full support! *salutes* I really like the time skip here I think it really compliments the story flow. I really can't wait to see what happens next now that Sasuke is a hot piece of ass mwaahahah! You're one of the few writers I like and to hear you under such stress makes me sad. XD Anyways! Thanks for the update this time and I sit on the edge of my seat for the next installment!
person despairs
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read it again...the only thing that really bother me is the kiss at the end. Sasuke seemed REALLY into it :( If thats acting then he needs to become an actor. He would win all kinds of awards. I really hope he isnt into Karin now *cries* I blame Naruto..why did he have to get with that Hana anyways...he knows deep down he has feelings for Sasuke. *growls* I thought it was going to be a good thing for Sasuke to be homeschooled, i thought it would bring them closer together but all it really did was get the blonde DOBE a new girlfriend. Wahhhhhhhhh! If Naruto thought Sasuke was so bad at kissing then why didnt HE teach him. BLAH! Ok now i'm done ranting lol.