rate_review Reviews

Even though it's a short (for you ^_~ ) PWP, you still manage to put a lot of craft into this. I like the ending a lot. It's so simple, but the way it's written does give you the sense of a refreshing breeze blowing away a moment in time and, both literally and figuratively, clearing the air. I also liked the description of the way Raidou smelled (the tang of explosive powder), and I like that you spent the fic focusing on the actual act of sex with penetration. So many fics spend a lot of time building up, and then at the end, it's like, 'okay they're doing it now. okay, they just did it.' It can be kind of frustrating! Because the actual act of sex can definitely be the best part, but I think writers feel challenged because they don't want to write 'thrust-thrust-thrust-moan-thrust' but OBVIOUSLY, it can be written well, without being boring, while being totally sexy, because you did so right here.

im so glad you have a set for this pair couse i love how you write them

You are one of the best lemon authors on the site. *whew*

Ahh! Wonderful!! Two perfect stories!!

I didn't leave you a review here on aff. ^^ Thank you for this wonderfull piece of .. art!
I just read it again. :-p I don't know how often i've read your two Rai / Gen stories by now. They are both so gorgious, i have to go back from time to time to take a look at them again. XD

Love you. : )

Awesome. Thank you. I don't even have any concrit. This scene is so pretty and complete by itself, like an unset, cut jewel.

Ohhhh, this one really leaves me fevered. Your "PWP"s are dangerous! That opening goes on the list of top five hottest things evah. The middle and ending make the list,too- So that only leaves two spots open... and your other stuff fills those spots, too.

What a great way to lift your spirits after a long, hard mission. And what a tasssty thing to come to. I just can't write a coherent, "concrit" sort of comment about this one. Can't do it. *droooooooool* ^_____^

more more more more more! the relationship you've made between these two is absolutely breathtaking, and i want you to continue writing about them! you are an amazing author, the best i've read in fanfiction - ever.

That was fucking great! *gives you a gold star* you deserve it. Love the pairing by the way, I usually read them with Genma being the Seme but like I said this was FUCKING GREAT!! You did both the characters justice it's like how they would be you know? Like that was them REALLY them pure and all. I just loved this a lot! Keep writing and hope to read more stories from ya.

Nice!!